About hobby
I am writing an essay everyday. I would appreciate if you correct natural expression and some errors as well.
Thanks so much!
Q1. What do you like to do in your free time?
Usually, I like to relax at home and watching Netflix show, Youtube.....
This question makes me bit problem, I don't really have a hobby.
Ok, If I must say, I like watching Korean drama, reading books, going to gym, but these aren't my hobby.
Q2. What kind of drama do you prefer?
Mainly I love comedy and human drama. Now I am watching a drama on Netflix.
It's“Kim’s convenience”.
This drama is the first Asian TV show which is admitted by Canadian. This is a story of a Korean immigrant family drama.
Main character Appa (dad) runs a convenience store where exists in Toronto for real(same name, I have seen it).
He is very stubborn and cause a lot of problems with people but in a nutshell his character especially clumsiness and warm heart attract people.
In the drama, a lot of races come out and it shows real Toronto life which I missed.
If you like comedy and family drama, I would recommend this!
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About hobby
I am writing an essay everyday. I would appreciate it if you corrected it using natural expressions.Thank you so much!
Q1. What do you like to do in your free time?
Usually, I like to relax at home and watch Netflix shows or Youtube.....
This question is a bit troublesome for me, because I don't really have a hobby.
Ok, If I had to say, I'd say that I like watching Korean dramas, reading books, going to gym, but these aren't my hobbies.
Q2. What kind of drama do you like ?
Mainly I love comedy and human drama. Now I am watching a drama on Netflix.
It's called “Kim’s convenience”.
This drama is the first Asian TV show to be admitted by Canadian. (? I am not ceratin what you wanted to say) This is a story of a Korean immigrant family drama.
Main character Appa (dad) runs a convenience store that exists in Toronto for real (same name, I have seen it).
He is very stubborn and causes a lot of problems for people but in a nutshell, his character, especially clumsiness and warm heart attracts people.
In the drama, a lot of races (you mean 人類 right ?) come out and it shows real Toronto life which I have missed.
If you like comedy and family drama, I would recommend this!
Sorry I did not highlight corrected parts, but there were too many of them! Keep up the good work !
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