网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
- 自卑心里的青少年趋于为了令人注目他们就采纳挑衅的姿态。(Teenagers with low self esteem are inclined to adopt a provocative attitude so to attract people's attention. )
- “我绝不会背叛我的爷爷啊”喊起来了小王。 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang)
- 情报拼命低姿态，往往切忌跟别人说话。不过他突然用德语叫喊出于痛苦了，他就揭露他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.)
- 原来她一直都是之间咱们搬弄是非。她显形很不好的人，品德都没有。(It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.)
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网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
- 自卑心里的青少年趋于为了令人注目他们就采纳挑衅的姿态。(Teenagers with low self esteem are inclined to adopt a provocative attitude so to attract people's attention. )自尊心较低的青少年倾向于采取一种挑衅的态度来吸引人们的注意力。
- “我绝不会背叛我的爷爷啊”喊起来了小王。 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang)
“我绝不会背叛我的爷爷！”小王喊道。
- 情报拼命低姿态，往往切忌跟别人说话。不过他突然用德语叫喊出于痛苦了，他就揭露他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.)
这名间谍保持低调，甚至避免跟人交谈。可是，当他疼得用德语喊叫时，他暴露了他的身份。
- 原来她一直都是之间咱们搬弄是非。她显形很不好的人，品德都没有。(It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.)
她一直在挑拨离间让我们对立。这已经证明了她是一个缺乏道德的坏人。
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网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
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- 自卑心里的青少年趋于为了令人注目他们就采纳挑衅的姿态。(Teenagers with low self esteem are inclined to adopt a provocative attitude so to attract people's attention. ) 心低自尊的青年会倾- “我绝不会背叛我的爷爷啊”喊起来了小王。 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang) 小王大叫一声: 我绝不会背叛爷爷! (This way gives more excitement)
- 情报拼命低姿态，往往切忌跟别人说话。不过他突然用德语叫喊出于痛苦了，他就揭露他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.) /勉
- 原来她一直都是之间咱们搬弄是非。她显形很不好的人，品德都没有。(It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.) 原来她在挑拨离间我们, 証明了她品德全非, 是个小人
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网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
- 自卑心里理的青少年趋于为了令人注目，他们就采纳挑衅的姿态。(Teenagers with low self esteem are inclined to adopt a provocative attitude so to attract people's attention. )- “我绝不会背叛我的爷爷啊”小王喊起来了。 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang)
- 情报员拼命尽量保持低姿态，往往切忌避免跟别人说话。不过他突然用德语叫喊出于痛苦了（？），他就揭露暴露他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.)
- 原来她一直都是之间咱们咱们之间搬弄是非。她显形显然是很个坏人，品德都没有。(It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.)
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网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
有自卑心理的青少年傾向於使用挑釁的態度來吸引人們的關注。
小王大喊：“我不能出賣我自己的爺爺”
- “我绝不会背叛（mejor 出賣, 背叛 es una palabra muy fuerte, pues parece mas in literatura o peliculas patrioticas ）我（自己）的爷爷啊”喊起来了小王(Sub+verb. entonces 小王喊了起来 )。 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang)
間諜/特工/情報人員 想盡辦法不透露自己的身份，甚至常常避免與人交談。 不過當他用德語大喊痛時， 他的身份曝光了。
- 情报人員拼命保持低姿态，往往切忌避免跟别人说话。不过他突然用德语叫喊出于痛苦了，他就揭露了他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.)
原來是她一直在我們之間搬弄是非，她這樣做真沒水準， 人品很差。
- 原来她一直都是之间咱们 (entre nosotros? jaja en chino, se dice 在 algo之間 )搬弄是非。她显形很不好的人(no parece natural)，一點品德都没有。(一點 algo 都没 verbo es une estructura para enfatizar y expresar un sentimiento negativo/ critico de "hacer / hay nada") (It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.)
Entonces, tu chino es ya muy bien, buena continuacion ;)
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网友们好，请帮我纠正这四个句子。提前致谢！
- 有自卑心理的青少年为了引人注目他们就采纳挑衅的姿态。(Teenagers with low self esteem are inclined to adopt a provocative attitude so to attract people's attention. )- “我绝不会背叛我的爷爷啊”。小王喊道 ("I cannot betray my own grandfather! yelled Xiao Wang)
- 间谍拼命保持低调，往往避免跟别人说话。不过当他突然出于痛苦而用德语叫喊，他就暴露他自己了。( The spy tried his best to stay lowkey, often even avoiding to talk with people. However, when he shouted in German out of pain, he revealed himself.)
- 原来一直都是她在咱们之间搬弄是非。显然她是个很不好的卑鄙的人，缺乏道德。(It turns out she had been pitting us against each other all along. She has proven herself to lack all morals, she is a bad person.)
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