Corrections · 4
How Excited I Was! 1
I can remember exactly how excited I was excited that when I could speak either my first English words or some simple sentences utter words or simple sentences in English. I jumped hopped around like a baby bird and shouted out aloud, "Apple!", "Mummy, I like an apple", "Please, give me some apples,please" when as I came back home... My mum mother 2looked at me tenderly and held me in her arms and whispered to me a suggestions whispering in Vietnamnese : "Y3ou have to try your best to learn study hard. I hope that when you are grown up, many years later,when you will be mature, you can get an intersting will get a good job. Then you can fly to anywhere you wanted and take me and your dad and your private immediate family and me to many places in the world". I smiled at her and nodded in agreement. gave her a nod of assent.4
1. All words in a Title are capitalized.
2. Mummy is the word for mother, used by little children. Mum, is a more affectionate word from the children even though they are adults now. Mother is used more by people of maturity.
3. http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm
4. Assent means agreement and at the same time has a subtle meaning to give permission. Here a plain "agreement" is more appropriate.
http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
