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How excited I was! I can remember exactly how I was excited that I could speak either my first English words or some simple sentences. I jumped like a baby bird and shouted aloud "apple", "mum,I like an apple", "give me some apples,please" when I came back home...My mum looked at me tenderly and held me in her arms and whispered to me a suggestions in Vietnamnese: "you have to try your best to learn hard.I hope many years later,when you will be mature, you can get an intersting job, you can fly to anywhere you want and take me and your dad and your private family to many places in the world". I smiled at her and gave her a nod of assent.

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How Excited I Was! 1

I can remember exactly how excited I was excited that when I could speak either my first English words or some simple sentences utter words or simple sentences in English. I jumped hopped around like a baby bird and shouted out aloud, "Apple!", "Mummy, I like an apple", "Please, give me some apples,please" when as I came back home... My mum mother 2looked at me tenderly and held me in her arms and whispered to me a suggestions whispering in Vietnamnese : "Y3ou have to try your best to learn study hard.  I hope that when you are grown up,  many years later,when you will be mature, you can get an intersting will get a good job.  Then you can fly to anywhere you wanted and take me and your dad and your private immediate family and me to many places in the world". I smiled at her and nodded in agreement. gave her a nod of assent.4

1.  All words in a Title are capitalized.

2.  Mummy is the word for mother, used by little children.  Mum, is a more affectionate word from the children even though they are adults now.  Mother is used more by people of maturity.

3.  http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm

4.  Assent means agreement and at the same time has a subtle meaning to give permission.  Here a plain "agreement" is more appropriate.

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

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