你好，Josh:

很高興看到你的中文程度這麼高，如果拿掉英文，還是能看懂你想說的意思。如果特別要挑剔的話， 只有標點符號的部份需要改進（puntuation)

e.g 我一邊看天空一邊流淚 （[emoji]） 

2. 這本漫畫是一個恐怖的故事 = the sentence flows better with the subject

3.不知道接下來會發生什麼事 =  for the connected speech 

 4."whatever else" 還有其他之類的= is equivalent to  "whatever else" as in colloquial speech. "之類的"something like that, ”其他“＝else

比如像是 －such as.. (use when listing examples)

星期六的夜晚

Should you have any questions, please let me know. :)

sarah 

星期六的夜晚

Great! Sounds like an epics.

星期六的夜晚
It’s late at night on a Saturday. I’m curled up in bed and reading a manga by Junji Ito. I keep my feet off the floor so that no monster can grab me. It’s a frightening story and I am anxiously turning the pages, wondering what will happen next. I am young. Younger than I am now and my imagination runs wild.
星期六夜裏很晚了(or 星期六深夜)。我蜷縮在床上看伊藤潤二的漫畫，雙腳離地，以免被怪物抓到。這是一個恐怖的故事，我緊張地翻著書頁，想知道接下來會發生什麼。我還年輕，比我現在年輕，有著狂野的想象力。

This is not the first time I’ve been in this situation. Truth is, I’ve always liked scary stories. Ever since I was a kid I would watch scary movies, read scary books, or play scary games regardless of my parents permission and I always curled up in bed, hiding from monsters that lurked in the shadows.
這已經不是我第一次處在這種情況下。老實說，我總是喜歡恐怖的故事。從小不管我父母允不允許，我喜歡看恐怖電影，看恐怖的書，還有玩恐怖遊戲，而且我總是蜷縮在床上，躲避潛伏在陰影中的怪物。

I think I liked being scared. But why?
我想我喜歡被驚嚇，但是為什麼呢？

I think because there are many frightening things in the world. Things we don’t understand and maybe, like the characters in Junji Ito’s stories, we’re all at the mercy of things beyond our control. The horror genre can explore many themes. Fear, insecurity, the unknown, the fear of failure, the fear of the future and whatever else. And maybe the comfort in all this is that we are not alone with these fears. In the end, we all have something in common.
我想因為世界上有很多可怕的東西，我們不理解的東西，也許像伊藤潤二的故事中的人物那洋，我們都聽從我們無法控制的事物的擺布。恐怖題材可以探討許多主題：恐懼，不安全感，未知；對失敗的恐懼，對未來的恐懼以及無論其它什麽。也許這一切之中令人安慰的是我們並非獨自面對這些恐懼。歸根到底，我們都有一些共同之處。

It’s late at night on Saturday. I’m curled up in bed reading a manga by Junji Ito. I keep my feet off the floor so that no monsters will grab me. I’m an adult now. Not a child anymore. I know there’s nothing under my bed. I know that I’m safe and I know monsters do not exist and they certainly don’t live under beds. But just in case....
星期六夜裏很晚了(or 星期六深夜)。我蜷縮在床上看伊藤潤二的漫畫，雙腳離地，以免被怪物抓到。我現在是大人了，不再是小孩子了。我知道床底下什麼也沒有。我知道我是安全的，怪物是不存在的，他們肯定不住在床下面。但為了以防萬一…