A new bicycle
I intended to buy a new electric bike for my wife. But she insisted on buying a bicycle. And finally I bought a new good bicycle for her. It looked beautiful and strong. It took me two hours' time to assemble it because it was broken into pieces when sent. When finished assembling, she rode it back home, whereas I rode an electric bike. She felt tired after about twenty minutes' riding because she had been lacking exercises for a long time. We exchanged, and I also felt tired soon, for I lacked exercises too. I thought my wife's decision was right because we both needed exercises.
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A New Bicycle
I intended to buy a new electric bike for my wife. but she insisted on buying a manual versionbicycle. And Finally I bought a new good bicycle one for her. It looked beautiful and well-made strong. It took me two hours' time to assemble it because as it was shipped disassembledbroken into pieces when sent. When finished assembling Afterwards, she rode it back home with it, whereas I rode an the electric one bike. She felt tired after In about twenty minutes' of riding, she tired out since because she was had been lacking not fit enough due to the lack of exercise for a long time. We exchanged, swapped our bikes and soon I also felt was tired soon. for I lacked I too had been a long time couch potatoexercises too. I thought My wife's decision was right because we both needed exercising.如果有更改的地方不明, 請问 :)
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A new bicycle
I intended to buy a new electric bike for my wife. But she insisted on buying a bicycle. Finally I bought a bicycle for her, it looked beautiful and strong. It took me two hours' to assemble because it was broken into pieces when sent. When I finished assembling it she rode it back home, whereas I rode an electric bike. She felt tired after about twenty minutes of riding because she had been lacking exercise for a long time. We exchanged, and I also soon felt tired for I also lacked exercise. I thought my wife's decision was right because we both needed exercise.1
A new bicycle
I intended to buy a new electric bike for my wife but she insisted on buying a bicycle. Finally I bought a new bicycle for her. It looked beautiful and strong. It took me two hours' time to assemble it because it was broken into pieces when sent it arrived. When I finished assembling it, she rode it back home, whereas I rode an the electric bike. She felt tired after about twenty minutes' riding because she had been lacking exercises for a long time (was unfit/hadn't done any exercise for a while). We exchanged swapped, and I was also felt tired soon because I was also unfit, for I lacked exercises too. I thought my wife's decision was right because we both needed exercises.1
I was intending to buy an new electric bike for my wife. But she insisted on buying a bicycle. And finally I bought a new good bicycle for her. It looked beautiful and strong. It took me two hours' time to assemble it because it was broken into pieces when sent. When finished assembling, she rode it back home, whereas I rode the electric bike. She felt tired after about twenty minutes' riding because she has not exercised for a long time. We exchanged, and I also felt tired soon, for I lacked exercises too. I thought my wife's decision was right because we both needed exercises.
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You have a Very good writing and I actually support your wife decision to buy a bicycle instead of an electric bike, lol, because riding bicycles is a very good sport.
Thanks
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