my future
Correct this test, please! And then answer me to my final question :)
On September I'll start my last year in high school and then I'll have to go to university! Well, I'm really happy about it, I want to start a new y kind of life and live by my own. The problem is that I'm a little bit confused about what i'm going to study...I'd like to go to a theatre Academy, but it's really difficult to enter in. My second choice is studying Economy and Management, but there a lot of courses about that...
Furthermore my friends (and also I) think that my future is theatre and cinema, but I don't know...
I like the idea of studying Marketing and Global Markets, and, obviously, this kind of study is more sicure about finding job.
Some people say that I could study Economy and then Theatre, but I don't want to spend my life at school...
well, I could study Economy and subscribe me in some agency, that find for me some theatre job, but I want to learn the bases of dramatic art and I think that being in an Academy makes me more happy. What should I do?
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I corrected this for you, and I think it sounds much more natural.
A question though, is this a formal piece of writing or informal? I feel it is written in an informal way.
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My Future
Correct this test text, please! And then answer me to my final question :)On September I'll start my last year in high school and then I'll have to go to university! Well, I'm really happy about it, I want to start a new y kind of life and live by on my own. The problem is that I'm a little bit confused about what I'm going to study...I'd like to go to an theatre Academy Academy of Theatre, but it's really difficult to enter in be accepted entry. My second choice is studying Economy Economics and Management, but there are a lot of courses about that to to choose from...
Furthermore, my friends (and also I) and I think that my future is in theatre and cinema, but I don't know...
I like the idea of studying Marketing and Global Markets, and, obviously, this these kinds of study studies is are more sicure secure about in finding a job.
Some people say that I could study Economy Economics and then Theatre, but I don't want to spend my entire life at school...
Well, I could study Economy Economics and subscribe me sign up with in some agency, that could find for me some theatre job job in a theatre, but I want to learn the bases basics of dramatic arts and I think that being in an Academy would makes me more happy. What should I do?
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What should you do? Leave your options open, also no one is sure about what to do in life. You will hopefully find yourself in school, and that will help you determine the direction you want to go in life :)
Buona fortuna!
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Hi, maybe with some change it would sounds more natural for me.
Correct thistest text, please! And then answer me to my final question :)
On September I'll start my last year in high school and then I'll have to go to university! Well, I'm really happy about it, I want to start a new kind of life andlive living by my own myself. The problem is that I'm a little bit confused about what i'm going to study...I'd like to go to a theatre Academy, but it's really difficult to enter in. My second choice is would be studying Economy and or Management, but there a lot of courses about that...
Furthermore otherwise my friends (and also I) think that my future is theatre and cinema, but I don't know...
I like the idea of studying Marketing and Global Markets, and, obviously, this kind ofstudy sector is more sicure easyer to find job.
Some people say that I could study Economy and then Theatre, but I don't want to spend my life at school...
well, I could study Economy and subscribe me in some agency, that find for me some theatre job, but I want to learn the bases of dramatic art and I think that being in an Academy would makes memore happier. What should I do?
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On September I'll start my last year in high school and then I'll have to go to university! Well, I'm really happy about it, I want to start a new kind of life and
I like the idea of studying Marketing and Global Markets, and, obviously, this kind of
Some people say that I could study Economy and then Theatre, but I don't want to spend my life at school...
well, I could study Economy and subscribe me in some agency, that find for me some theatre job, but I want to learn the bases of dramatic art and I think that being in an Academy would makes me
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