Search from various English teachers...
宛婷
A Special Day to Remember A Special Day to Remember I always remember my birthday in 2017. Not only because that was my birthday but the jolly memory I had with my friends. The day before my birthday, I studied all night for the next day exam. That exam was important to me. I intended to change my school from vocational school to senior high school. If I couldn't pass the exam, my application would be rejected. " Tomorrow must be a tough day. " I said to myself gradually feeling asleep. The next day, when I came out from classroom with worry, my friends jumped out right in front of me and gave me a big surprise! I was so grateful and joy that they thrown a birthday party for me. In the party, some people sang songs, another people enjoyed feast and the other people chatted happily. There was a wonderful atmosphere round the room and I could see the light on everyone's faces. Before cutting the birthday cake, I made a wish that I can remember this special day forever. Reading those cards given by my friends, I was filled with new energy and power. Though I was still confuse and didn't know how I should chose for my future road, I will keep living hard with my friends' blessing.

Corrections · 2

1

A Special Day to Remember

This is really good. I have made some corrections in yellow and some suggested improvements in blue

A Special Day to Remember
I will always remember my birthday in 2017. Not only because that was my birthday but because of the happy memory I had with my friends. The day before my birthday, I studied all night for the next day's exam. That exam was important to me. I intended to change my school from vocational school to senior high school. If I couldn't pass the exam, my application would be rejected. " Tomorrow will be a tough day. " I said to myself gradually falling asleep.
The next day, when I came out of the classroom feeling worried, my friends jumped out right in front of me and gave me a big surprise! I was so grateful and joyful that they had thrown a birthday party for me. During the party, some people sang songs, other people enjoyed feast and the rest chatted happily. There was a wonderful atmosphere around the room and I could see the light on everyone's faces. Before cutting the birthday cake, I made a wish that I could remember this special day forever.
Reading those cards given by my friends, I was filled with new energy and power. Though I was still confused and didn't know how I should choose for my future path, I will keep living well* with my friends' blessing.


Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today