Please correct part of my essay.
This is part of my essay. I am writing about restaurant which is my favorite.
First, Gusto has more than one hundred menus. It services Italian dishes and Japanese, too. The Italian ones, for example, hamburg steaks, chicken, beef stakes, pizza, and spaghetti. Japanese dishes such as udon, pork cutlets, deep fried chicken, and so on. You can eat both dishes. In addition, there are a lot of beverages and sweets. Thus, you can eat different dishes whenever you go to there.
Second, the all dishes are very delicious. Gusto is a Western restaurant, but Japanese dishes are also tasty. The most popular dish is “cheese in hamburg steak.” The cheese which flowing from inside the hamburg steak will tempt your appetites. The cheese is rich,and the meat is so tender. A mixture of them is really good. You will be surprised with its deliciousness. You should to try it.
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Please correct part of my essay.
This is part of my essay. I am writing about restaurant which is my favorite.First, Gusto has more than one hundred options on the menu. menus, including both Italian and Japanese dishes. It services Italian dishes and Japanese, too. The Italian dishes include hamburg steaks, chicken, beef steaks, pizza, and spaghetti. Japanese dishes include udon, pork cutlets, deep fried chicken, and so on. You can eat both dishes. In addition, there are a lot of beverages and sweets to choose from. Thus, you can eat different dishes whenever you go to there.
Secondly, the all of the dishes are very absolutely delicious. Gusto is a Western restaurant, but the Japanese dishes are also tasty. The most popular dish is “cheese in hamburg steak.” The cheese which flowing from inside the hamburg steak will tempt your appetites. The cheese is rich, and the meat is so tender. A The mixture of them the two is really good. You will be surprised with by its deliciousness. You should to try it.
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This is part of my essay. I am writing about restaurant which is my favorite.
Firstly, Gusto has more than one hundred menus. Itservices serves Italian dishes and Japanese, too. The Italian ones, for example, hamburger steaks stakes, chicken, beef stakes, pizza, and spaghetti. Japanese dishes such as udon, pork cutlets, deep fried chicken, and so on. You can eat both dishes. In addition, there are a lot of beverages and sweets. Thus, you can eat different dishes whenever you go to there.
Secondly,the all the dishes are very delicious. Gusto is a Western restaurant, but the Japanese dishes are also tasty. The most popular dish is “cheese in hamburger steak.” The cheese which flowing flows from inside the hamburger steak will tempt your appetites. The cheese is rich,and the meat is so tender. A mixture of both of them is really good. You will be surprised with its deliciousness. You should to try it.
Those were your few mistakes. Interesting topic and keep practicing!! :)
Firstly, Gusto has more than one hundred menus. It
Secondly,
Those were your few mistakes. Interesting topic and keep practicing!! :)
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