Sleeping on the Roof
There is an advantage of living in the countryside that people can sleep on the roofs of their houses in the summer evening. After supper, my wife suggests we sleep a while on our house roof. I agreed and we take a bamboo mat, a pillow and a sheet onto the roof. There is more wind on the roof comparing to the ground and I feel comfortable when it blowing to me. We are lying , watching stars scattered in the dark sky blinking their eyes，listening to the tweedle of birds who are not asleep yet. There is no mosquito and fly here because the wind is big and the roof is high. Everything is fine here except the roof is a little bit hot after a day's exposure below the sun.
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As we are lying laid, we watched the stars scattered in the dark sky; blinking winking their eyes at us;，listening to the tweedle listening to the yet-to-sleep twittering of birds who are not asleep yet. Best of all, there is no mosquito and or fly here because the wind is big too strong for them and the roof is high. Everything Still an almost perfect setting is fine here except because the roof is still a little bit hot after a day's exposure below to the sun.
Up on the Roof :)
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Sleeping on the Roof
There is An advantage of living in the countryside is that people we 有亲切感can sleep on the roofstops of our their houses homes on a in the summer's evening. After supper, my wife suggested we sleep napped for a while on our house rooftop. I agreed and we take took a bamboo mat, a pillow and a bed sheet with us onto the roof. There It is more windier on the roof comparing up here to the ground.and I feel felt comfortable when it blowing to the wind caressed me.1
Sleeping on the roof
There is an advantage to living in the countryside: that people can sleep on the roofs of their houses in the summer evening. After the supper, my wife suggested (past tense) that we should sleep a while on the roof of our house for a while. I agreed and we took (past tense) a bamboo mat, a pillow and a sheet onto the roof. There was more wind on the roof than the ground and I felt comfortable when it blew on me. We were lying , watching the scattered stars in the dark sky blinking their eyes，listening to the chirping of the birds that are not asleep yet. There is no mosquitos or flies here because the wind is strong (remember that the wind only has intensity, not size, then you describe it with intensity adjectives: strong, weak, etc.) and the roof is high. Everything was fine here, except that the roof was a little bit hot after a day being exposed to the sun.1
Sleeping on the Roof
There is an advantage of to living in the countryside; that people can sleep on the roofs of their houses in the summer evenings. After supper, my wife suggested we sleep on the a while on our house roof of our house. I agreed and we took a bamboo mat, a pillow, and a sheet onto the roof. There was more wind on the roof comparing to than on the ground, and I felt comfortable when it blew on to me. We were lying , watching the stars scattered in the dark sky, blinking their eyes，listening to the tweedle (chirping?) of the birds who were not sleeping yet. There were no mosquitos and or flies here because the wind is strong big and the roof is high. Everything was fine here, except the roof was a little bit hot after a day's exposure to below the sun.Well done :)
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