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A sketch in Gothic style It was a dark damp night and the cold wind whistled in the trees and the grass echoed to it, as it seemed to a traveler. The fain rain falling from the heaven added a charm to this picture and if the traveler were an artist he could be remembered it to paint afterwards. But he wasn’t any artist, he was only a tramp. He was on his own, choosing a way he liked better and not had any duty in the world. He was crossing the meadow in the bottom of a valley surrounding by mountains and cutting by a river which seemed black in the night. "The spot is fine maybe in the daylight," he thought as he cross the river which got him to the chest. He didn’t fear to be drawn, he swum very well, or he thought so. The stream was not strong and soon he got the other bank and had a look around. The plain valley stretched out before him to the mountains where as he knew a village or a town was, there he could be dry out and rest. But now there was no sight of light, so he went on. The grass was taller here and his legs tired soon through he didn’t find any of a cubby hole he decided to camp out right here in the fresh air under the fain rain. He had a coat big enough to hide him from the rain but not from the wet. He could take cold but it was usually for him, so he didn’t afraid for his health. "In the morning I’ll dry out my clothes and myself before set off to the village," he thought. He was nearly slept when he heard a sound of riding horses approaching him. He peeped out to look what it was but saw nothing. The sound became loudly as it approached. He stood up to be seen and when saw a few riders going towards him. They looked like an apocalypse’s riders or some like this, so he just like this was afraid although he knew there was nothing to fear.

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He had a His coat was big enough to hide shield him from the rain but not from the getting wet. He could take is used to the cold. but it was usually for him, so he didn’t afraid for No hinderance to his health. 

"In the morning I’ll shall dry out my clothes and myself before setting off to the village," he muttered to himselfthought. 

He was nearly slept  asleep when he heard a sounds of riding horses came approaching him. He peeped out to opened his eyes but nothingness was around. look what it was but saw nothing. The sound became gradually became louder as it neared approached. He stood up to be seen and when saw a few riders going galloping towards him. They looked like an apocalypse’s riders or some like this, so like the Riders of the Apocalypse.  he just like this was afraid Fear crept up his spine although he knew there was nothing to fear.
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He didn’t  Nothing to fear to be drawn, about as he is a strong swimmer swum very well, or he thought so. Can't have this part because it forbodes something sinister later. The stream a stream is smaller than a river.  So the two words are not interchangeable.  current was not strong and soon he got reached the other oppositive bank.  He  and had a looked around. The plain valley stretched out before him to the mountains where as he knew was a village  or a town was, where he could be dry out and take a rest there. But now There was no sign of any sight of light of the place and so he continued with his journey went on. The grass was taller here and soon his legs grew tired. soon through He didn’t could find any of a cubby hole no shelter.  He decided  had to oblige himself with camp out right here in the fresh air and under the fain rain as. 

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A sketch in Gothic style Story

It was a dark damp night and to a traveller, the cold wind whistled in the trees were whistling and the grasses sighing in the wind.  echoed to it, as it seemed to a traveler.  if imaginative enough, he would The fain rain falling from the heaven added as an added charm to this picture.  And if the traveler were an artist at heart, he could be remembered it to paint afterwards a painting would result afterward. But In truth, there would be no such thing happening for he wasn’t any artist, he was only a tramp. He was on his own.  Nary a worry nor duty in his chosen way of life. choosing a way he liked better and not had any duty in the world.


He was crossing the meadow in at the bottom of a valley surrounding by mountains there can be no valley without mountains and cutting  met by a river which seemed black as River Styx in the night.


"The spot is fine maybe Perhaps it would be better in the daylight," he thought to himself as he crossed the river which got him  by now is up to the his chest.

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