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Football The final match, France and Croatia is tonight! Although I think the semifinal match, France and Belgium was practically a final match, I' m very excited about tonight's game. Usually the forward players are picked up on the paper and the internet, so people are likely to get into their super goals. But I always like to watch who passes the ball to the forward, how they assist the forward's goal. That's a team sport. Due to advance of camera technology , not mention to slow video, you can also watch the scene from various angles. The surprising thing is that you can see the game from the sky like bird's eye view. Probably it is taken by drones. Watching the play from the sky helps me to understand their strategy better and it gets me to be more addicted to football. I'm going to miss watching football after the final match, but another attraction is coming to me next Sunday. It's Attack On Titan season 3 on TV. I can't wait. My taste sounds like a boy's. Hahaha!

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Football

The final match, France and Croatia, is tonight! Although I think the semi-final between France and Belgium was practically a final*, I' m very excited about tonight's game. Usually the forward players are picked up on in the papers and on the internet, so people are likely to get into their super goals. But I always like to watch who passes the ball to the forward, how they assist the forward's goal. That's a team sport.
Due to the advance of (x) camera technology, not to mention slow motion video, you can also watch the scene from various angles. The surprising thing is that you can see the game from the sky, like a bird's eye view. Probably this** is taken by drones.  {Often there is a camera on wires overhead :) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Skycam }
Watching the play from the sky helps me to understand the*** strategy better, and it gets me to be more addicted to football.
I'm going to miss watching football after the final match, but another attraction is coming (to me) next Sunday. It's Attack On Titan season 3 on TV. I can't wait.
My taste sounds like a boy's. Hahaha!****

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There are very few errors in your piece, and some of these "corrections" are really just alternative style suggestions. You probably know you write English very well.

* repeating "match" is not an error. Many people, though, regard it as better style to avoid repetition unless you specially want it for emphasis.

** "it" is not wrong. "This" might sound a little more natural.  Or even "this angle" or "this view".

*** "their strategy" is OK, but we haven't mentioned any "them" so I think "the strategy" works better.

**** https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=hahaha  >>>  https://www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/hahaha-vs-hehehe

(x) "Due to advances in" is an alternative here.

phrasal verbs  https://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/pick-up-on

https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/punctuation/comma


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The final match, between France and Croatia is tonight! Although I think the semifinal match, between France and Belgium was practically a final match, I'm very excited about tonight's game. Usually the forwards players are picked up focused on on the paper in the news and on the internet, so people are more likely to get into become interested in their super goals the amazing goals they make. But I always like to watch who passed passes the ball to the forward, and how they assist the forward's goal. That's why they call it a team sport.

Due to advance of advances in camera technology, not mention to slow-motion video, you can also watch the scene game from various angles. The surprising most amazing thing is that you can see the game from the sky like a bird's eye view. Probably it is Those shots are probably taken by drones.

Watching the play players from the sky bird's eye view helps me to understand their strategy better and it gets me to be more addicted to football.

I'm going to miss watching football after the final match, but another attraction exciting thing is coming to me next Sunday. It's Attack On Titan season 3. on TV. I can't wait.
My taste sounds like a boy's that of a child's. Hahaha!

（僕も進撃の巨人大好き！）
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Congratulations, France! The Golden Ball should go to Griezmann. Oh! Modrić from Croatia got it just now! Congratulations!
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@MarinS. Of course I watched it, I never missed such a great game! Counter attack of Belgium was thrilling. Watching them from bird eye's view is fantastic. I wanted Kevin De Bruyne from Belgium to get the Golden Ball.
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@Tuyet. I do too. I have to admit the midfielder, Modrić is super!

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