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Japan flagYasuyuki Arai
English If you could get something strange power tomorrow, what do you want? Is the ability that you could fly like a hawks? stop the time? etc もしあなたが不思議な力を手に入れることができるなら、何がいいですか? 鷹のように大空を舞う能力?

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* If you could have something strange power tomorrow, what do would you want?
Is ^ it the ability that you could to fly like a hawk, stop the time or something else?
stop the time? etc

もしあなたが不思議な力を手に入れることができるなら、何がいいですか?
鷹のように大空を舞う能力?

Hi Yasuyuki,

* This sentence is known as a second conditional sentence, as it describes a future scenario that is unlikely to occur. To form such a conditional sentence, we use the simple past tense. Example: If I could have the power of teleportation, I would visit other planets. 

^ This sentence will sound more natural if we put "it" here. This "it" is known as the anticipatory "it", meaning that the word "it" represents something that will be mentioned later in the sentence. In your sentence, "it" represents "the ability". 

Another example: It is a hot day. The "It" represents "a hot day" which is mentioned later in the sentence.

I hope this helps you. 

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If you could get something a strange power tomorrow, what would do you want? Is The ability that you could to fly like a hawk? Stop the time? etc もしあなたが不思議な力を手に入れることができるなら、何がいいですか? 鷹のように大空を舞う能力?

Those were your few mistakes. Good job and I think I would want to go back in time and not do any bad choices that I would have done!

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