Typical fauna in my city
This happened on a typical day in my country.
I was walking down through the neighborhood with my dog (a small sized brown hair 2 years old male datschund), on a summer night. It was all dark in the street and I was looking up to the trees. Suddenly, some leaves fall and I hear like something was jumping and running through the branches. I stopped and looked quiet for a while and I get totally shocked when I saw 5 RATS running between the trees!. The only thing that I did was running out of there. I never pass through through that street again.
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This happened on a typical day in my country. I was walking down through the neighborhood with my dog (a small sized brown hair 2 years old male datschund), on a summer night. It was all dark in the street and I was looking up to the trees. Suddenly, some leaves fall and I hear a sound like something was jumping and running through the branches. I stopped and looked around quietly for a while and I was totally shocked when I saw 5 RATS running between the trees!. The only thing that I did was run out of there. I never passed through that street again.
Good work! The errors in your writing were very minor.
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