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I want to talk to you about serial West World. It based on the sci-fi film 1973 years.
The serial talks to us about the man-made world, where have been lived androids instead of people. Androids are immortal and they have lived a life, which was encoded by developers people.
People have came to WW, because they might doing whatever they want. People coud follow the script or not. They might make a violence, kill or torture the androids and don't take any punishment. That world- the great opportunity to see through yourself and understand, who you are in fact.
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I want to talk to you about the series West World. It is based on a sci-fi film from 1973 years.The series talks to us about a man-made world where androids have been living instead of people. Androids are immortal and they live lives which were encoded by developers people.
People have come to WW because they can do whatever they want. People can follow the script or not. They might make violence, kill or torture the androids and not receive any punishment. That world- a great opportunity to see through yourself and understand who you are in fact.
Thanks for sharing, Svetlana! Because you started telling the story in the present tense, I made the tense match throughout. I also took out a few unnecessary commas. Cheers!
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