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Homecoming Ramadhan and then Eid Mubarak. This two moments are really precious for mosleem in Indonesia. We are so happy to celebrate it because we can visit and meet many relatives. That's why homecoming is the biggest tradition for Indonesian people. I have been living far away from my parents since 2010. It means I'm a part of homecoming tradițion for almost ten years. I ussually bought flight ticket 6 month before Eid Mubarak because I can get lower price in this time. So, I have already set the date for my flight. Many people Will use this moment to go back to their hometown because we ussually have a long holiday for celebrating Eid Mubarak. Traffics are everywhere along this moment. Police Officer are so busy to handle the traffic. Health Departement, Police Officer, Army and Transportătion departement works together to wacth the running of homecoming tradițion. People Will bring some souvernirs like food, clothes, hijab, and others. Indonesian people who works in another country, they also come back to Indonesia for this moment. Homecoming is just like every year's tradition for Indonesian. How about you guys? Have you ever taking apart for this tradition? Thank you.

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Homecoming

Ramadhan and then Eid Mubarak. These two moments are really precious for Muslims in Indonesia. We are so happy to celebrate it because we can visit and meet many relatives. That's why homecoming is the biggest tradition for Indonesian people.

I have been living far away from my parents since 2010. It means I'm a part of a homecoming tradițion for almost ten years. I usually bought flight tickets 6 months before Eid Mubarak because I can get lower price in that time. So, I have already set the date for my flight.

Many people use this moment to go back to their hometown because we usually have a long holiday for celebrating Eid Mubarak. Traffic is everywhere during this period. Police officers are busy handling traffic. The Health, Police, Army and Transportation departments work together to monitor the homecoming tradițion. People bring some souvenirs like food, clothes, hijab, and others.

Indonesian people who work in other countries also come back to Indonesia for this period. Homecoming is the same in every year's tradition for Indonesians.

How about you guys? Have you ever taken part of this tradition?

Thank you.
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Hi Amalya - I'm just doing a test to see why I couldn't submit my response!

Ramadhan and then Eid Mubarak. This two moments are really precious for mosleem in Indonesia. We are so happy to celebrate it because we can visit and meet many relatives. That's why homecoming is the biggest tradition for Indonesian people. 


I have been living far away from my parents since 2010. It means I'm a part of homecoming tradițion for almost ten years. I ussually bought flight ticket 6 month before Eid Mubarak because I can get lower price in this time. So, I have already set the date for my flight.

Many people Will use this moment to go back to their hometown because we ussually have a long holiday for celebrating Eid Mubarak. Traffics are everywhere along this moment. Police Officer are so busy to handle the traffic. Health Departement, Police Officer, Army and Transportătion departement works together to wacth the running of homecoming tradițion. People Will bring some souvernirs like food, clothes, hijab, and others.

Indonesian people who works in another country, they also come back to Indonesia for this moment. Homecoming is just like every year's tradition for Indonesian.

How about you guys? Have you ever taking apart for this tradition?

Thank you.
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Thank you for your kindness ^-^
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For some reason it won't let me submit my entry but I took a screenshot and will send it to you.

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