tremendous change in Korea.
There are many changes in Korea lately.
Although normal presidential replacement time is not at last winter, previous president Park is withdrawn by motion of impeachment.
There are changes also in relationship with North-Korea which is always hostile to us.
North-Korea Olympic team participated in PyeongChang Olympic games. With this chance South and North Korea are closer than the past and Summit happened in Panmunjeom(in DMZ)
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tremendous changes in Korea.
There are many changes in Korea lately.Although the presidential election was not scheduled for last winter (normal presidential replacement time is not at last winter), former (previous) president Park was ousted by impeachment. (is withdrawn by motion of impeachment.)
The nation's relationship with North Korea remains hostile.
(There are changes also in relationship with North-Korea which is always hostile to us. -->> why "changes" when it's "always"??)
North-Korea's Olympic team participated in the PyeongChang Olympic games. With this chance, South and North Korea are closer than before (the past). Also, a summit occurred (happened) in Panmunjeom (DMZ)
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