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Advantages and disadvantages about living in a small town It's a example about a essay, I hope that someone can review the example and give me feedback about it. Can you understand the idea? Does it have a good and clear organization? Could you look a paragraphs with significance? Thank you so much for help me! ^^ Advantages and disadvantages about living in a small town When you decide to move up in your life, normally this choice is following for get married and have a huge family. After that you and your couple need to decide, where do you want to live?. Nowadays, the modern families have Two options: a big town or city and a small town. Your decision depends about What kind of things are important for you and your family?. For this reason, I am giving my opinion about the advantages and disadvantages about living in a small town. At the moment that you decide living in a small town, you can have a closed relationship with your neighbors because you know where and who living in this. Another important advantages for example is that sometimes a lot of things as food, houses and child care are cheaper than the big towns. Moreover, your children have a personal education because, usually the class size is small. However, Living in a small town, also have a huge disadvantages. For example, When you need look for a job in some cases the opportunities are so few or maybe, you can’t get job on your profession. In addition, You and your family have less choices about entertainment, and sometimes, today it sounds kind of boring. Additionally, when Your children grow up, they will move to a city for made their major or bachelor program. On the whole, when you decide living in a small town, this decision have good and bad consequences. But in general all dependent of your lifestyle and the goals that you and your family have. If you want to take a carefree life in a peaceful place, the best choice for you and your family is living in a small town.

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It's a example about a essay, I hope that someone can review the example and give me feedback about it. Can you understand the idea? Does it have a good and clear organization? Could you look at the paragraphs with significance? Thank you so much for help me! ^^

Advantages and disadvantages about living in a small town.

When you decide to move up in your life, normally this choice is followed for when you get married and have a huge family. After that you and your couple mate need to decide, where do you want to live?. Nowadays, the modern families have Two options: a big town or city and a small town. Your decision depend about on What kind of things are important for you and your family? For this reason, I am giving my opinion about the advantages and disadvantages about living in a small town. At the moment that you decide living in a small town, you can have a close relationship with your neighbors because you know where and who is living in this. Another important advantage for example is that sometimes a lot of things such as food, houses and child care are cheaper than in the big towns. Moreover, your children have a personal education because, usually the class size is small. However, Living in a small town, also has a huge disadvantage. For example, When you need look for a job in some cases the opportunities are so few or maybe, you can’t get a job on your profession. In addition, You and your family have less choices about entertainment, and sometimes, today it sounds kind of boring. Additionally, when Your children grow up, they will move to a city for made to do their major or bachelor program. On the whole, when you decide living in a small town, this decision has good and bad consequences. But in general all depends on your lifestyle and the goals that you and your family have. If you want to take a carefree life in a peaceful place, the best choice for you and your family is living in a small town.

Good job those were your few mistakes! Interesting topic and keep practicing!!

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Remember "a" becomes "an" before words starting with a vowel, like "an essay". Words that start with a silent "h" should also have "an", such as "an hour". If you pronounce the "h", treat it like a consonant, like "a hat". This rule is to make things easier to say, because it is a little weird to say "a" before a vowel.

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