First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello guys, i am so glad to be here, and i have learned english for...let me see..over fifteen years since when i was a junior high student. i have little interest in english before i entered college, so my english is terrible during that period of time. i still remember that i got more and more interest in english when i became a sophomore, and i made a decision that i must grasp it no matter how much time i put in. for now i didn't come to the end of the road, but i did know i am improving little by little, step by step. today i ocassionaly find the italki, it's really a good place for learning language, and i registered at once. oh the point...why i want to learn english? what makes the decision made years before? just one word needed to make it clear---destiny
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I don't think there are major corrections needed. Maybe a little polish here and there with your new correction. However I must say that you must capitalize your "i"s when you write. It makes simply mars the over all quality of you essay. I hope you are being lazy here. In any formal setting, your essay will be thrown out. Even as I write and seeing your essay, it really irks the hell out of nitpickers and perfectionists like me.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello guys, i am so glad to be here, and i have learned english for...let me see..over fifteen years since when i was a junior high student. i have little interest in english before i entered college, so my english is terrible during that period of time. i still remember that i got more and more interest in english when i became a sophomore, and i made a decision that i must grasp it no matter how much time i put in. for now i didn't come to the end of the road, but i did know i am improving little by little, step by step. today i ocassionaly find the italki, it's really a good place for learning language, and i registered at once. oh the point...why i want to learn english? what makes the decision made years before? just one word needed to make it clear---destiny
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Beyond Self
Lol, excuse me for translated your nickname. I come from Tianjin, and now i have graduated for 5 years from college, though my work has nothing to do with english, i keep reading english article when i am not busy. Yes, i want to make friends here, and we can learn from each other. To your final exam, good luck to you.
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When I am reading your the first article, I was shocked.Why? Because I think your ability of English language is very well.When you express your idea, you can enter many senior word,such as "register" By the way,Iwant to know where are you come from.Frankly speaking, I am a senior student and I will attend the final examination,so I am very nervous. don't how to improve my ability of English.If it's possible, I want to commincate with you and make friends. How do you think my ideda. If you approve my invitition,please tell me. Thank you!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello guys, i am so glad to be here, and i have learned english for...let me see..over fifteen years since when i was a junior high student. i have little interest in english before i entered college, so my english is terrible during that period of time. i still remember that i got more and more interest in english when i became a sophomore, and i made a decision that i must grasp it no matter how much time i put in. for now i didn't come to the end of the road, but i did know that i have been improving little by little, step by step. today i ocassionaly find the italki, it's really a good place for learning language, and i registered at once. oh the point...why i want to learn english? what makes the decision made years before? just one word needed to make it clear---destiny
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