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My family
Today, I will be talking about my family. We are a family of five and the members are: my father, mother, my older sister and her son and myself.My father is not frank (not frank = a liar, therefore I am unsure of what you wanted to say here). He used to be a police officer, but retired it three years ago. He's working as a security guard now.
My mother is a very clumsy woman, but she always thinks of my family and works hard for us (you are included in your family). She is a housewife who sometimes works part time. Moreover She can use a sign language and has a certificate in baking.
My sister used to be an English teacher but retired after having a baby. Now she works in an office. Her son (my nephew) is 7 years old and is in second grade of elementary school. He's a very naughty boy.
We went on a family vacation several times when I was a child, but now we don't do that anymore, because I'm busy with my research at college. Hopefully, I will be able to travel with my family again in the future.
How about in your family? Do you get along with them?
Thank you for reading. Could you correct my sentences? Are there any other ways to say this? If you'd like, please teach me. Thanks.
My family
Today, I will introduce my family. We are a family of five, and includes my father, mother, older sister, my brother, and me. (There are five in my family.)My father is not frank. He was a police officer, but he retired three years ago and now works as a security guard.
My mother is very clumsy, but she is always thinking of my family and works hard for us. She is a housewife and sometimes works at a part time job. Moreover, she can use sign language and has a qualification for making bread. wow
Finally, My sister was a English teacher, but she retired because she had a baby at the time. she now works as an office worker. Her son or my nephew is 7 years old and in second grade of elementary school. He's just a naughty boy.
We went on several family trips when I was a child, but now not at all because I'm busy with my research in college. I hope I will get to travel with my family again.
How about your family. Do you get along with your family??
Thank you for reading. Could you correct my sentences? Are there any other ways to say this? If you'd like, please teach me. Thanks.
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