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Do you like travelling？ why or why not？ I am really into traveling due to clear benefits. First of all，travelling boarden my horizons for I will experience different dialects and culture. Moreover, I'm a gourmet. I can try different foods especially the local products . I will also encounter people from all walks of life. It will board and they will boarden my knowledge from chating. Finally,Travelling is a good way to relax from tremendous work and life pressure. All troubles will leave behind me while I experience the fresh air and beautiful scenery .
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Do you like traveling？Why or why not？I am really into traveling due to the clear benefits. First of all，travelling broadens my horizons because I will experience different dialects and culture. Moreover, I'm a gourmet. I can try different foods especially, the local products. I will also encounter people from all walks of life who will broaden my knowledge during chatting. Finally, traveling is a good way to relax from tremendous work and life pressures. All troubles will be left behind while I experience the fresh air and beautiful scenery.
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