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My cat My cat is a domestic shorthair. He has Black hair and yellow eyes. He's about one year and nine months old now.His name is"mao", and that's also how you say "cat" in Chinese, I really couldn't think of a better name for him. I adopted him when he was five months old. He showed distrust and a little hostility to me in the first three months, sometimes he jumped up and scratched me for no reason. He was very naughty and active before he was one and a half years old, he was interested to anything that was moving. I used to play with him with some cat toys in my free time. His favorite game was to let me throw the toys and he run to catch it. Sometimes when he saw an insect is flying or creeping, he would like to catch it as so crazy and I couldn't stop him. Now he's still very healthy and happy everyday, the different is now he usually lay on the windowsill and just sleep all day. He's my good companion and my family, he brought me a lot of happiness, I have so many happy memories of him.

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His favorite game was to let me throw the toys and he ran to catch them it. OR: His favorite game was to let me throw the toys and he ran to catch it.

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My cat is a domestic shorthair. He has Bblack hair and yellow eyes. He's about one year and nine months old now.  His name is"mMao", and that's also how you say "cat" in Chinese,.  (needed a period instead of a comma)  I really couldn't think of a better name for him.
I adopted him when he was five months old. He showed distrust and a little hostility to me in the first three months, and sometimes he jumped up and scratched me for no reason. (or "He showed distrust and a little hostility to me in the first three months and sometimes jumped up and scratched me for no reason." See how I corrected the first sentence in the next paragraph)
He was very naughty and active before he was one and a half years old, he w and was interested to in anything that was moving. I used to play with him with some cat toys in my free time. His favorite game was to let me throw the toys and he would run to catch it them. Sometimes when he saw an insect is flying or creeping, he would like to catch it.  He was as so crazy, and I couldn't stop him.
Now he's still very healthy and happy every day,.  The different difference is now is that he usually lay lies down on the windowsill and just sleeps all day. He's my good companion and my family, he and brought me a lot of happiness,. I have so many happy memories of him.

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Hope that helps. 

Kind regards.

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