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1.I’d like to recommend a way that you read aloud a lot of time for learn foreign language. Ultimately you have to get used to the phrases in your head by reading aloud. The best way is that you memorize all of phrases but it takes too long time. So you should go on to another phrase when you get used to a first phrase.
2.I don’t remember which book I read but the author said that some small similar accidents happen several times before a really big accident. So when a small accident happen if we recognize the importance of prevent recurrence we would prevent a big irretrievable accident.
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Dear Sir and Madame.
I am Korean, I'm married to a English woman and I have a visa mariage visa.
I have a korean driving licence and I'd like to get a English driving licence.
What steps should I take to obtain it?
Thank you in advance for your reply, best regards.
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1.I’d like to recommend a way that you whereby reading aloud a lot of time for a prolonged period of time for can facilitate learning a foreign language. Ultimately, you have to get used to the phrases in your head by reading them aloud. The best way to do that is that you to memorize all of those phrases but it although that can takes too a long time. So you should go on to another phrase when you have learned a first phrase the previous one.2.I don’t remember which book was it, I read but where the author said was saying that some small, similar accidents* happen several times before a really big accident. So when a small accident happens, if we recognize the importance of the previous recurrence, we would prevent a big irretrievable irreparable accident**.
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Dear Sir and /Madame,
I am Korean, I'm married to an English woman and I have a visa marriage visa***.
I have a Korean driving licence and I'd also like to get an English driving licence one.
What steps should I take to obtain it?
Thank you in advance for your reply, best regards.
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* accidents: consider using another word that might better convey what you want to describe. For instance, red flags, behavioural patterns, flaws in behaviour and so on.
** Consider rephrasing the text in blue. Here's a suggestion: .... that repeatedly observing a destructive behavioural pattern, is reason enough to suggest that things might climax dangerously in the future. Another suggestion would be: that all these red flags might be enough to tip us off that something is definitely wrong and things could worsen in the future. Or something like that. :-)
*** A better term might be spousal visa but I am not familiar with the terminology that the respective offices use.
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