Part 3:

Well, Thanks thanks.

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Omar, you do have some errors with verb tenses when they're in the past or future and with prepositional phrases, but overall your writing comes across clearly! It's really good to have a positive attitude like you do, especially after a setback (like your job interview). I hope you can get a job soon — keep on trying and don't give up!

Part 2:

I felt sad one moment for a moment, (a comma sounds more natural here) but I (consider I believe) will found find (future tense) one job a job soon. 

Later I returned to my home (consider I returned home) and I eated ate (consider had) salad of with or made of lettuce, carrots, crawberries (do you mean cranberries?) and (I also) drank/had (some) lemonade (otherwise, it sounds like the lemonade is part of the salad). I saw watched the TV for one hour (consider an hour) and next then or afterward or later (next can only work if you make this sentence into two: I watched the TV for one hour. Next, I went to walk in the park) I went to walk to in the park (consider I took a walk in the park), I listened the kids to play, to run to the kids play and run, (a comma is necessary here: these are two separate thoughts) and I felt happy and relax relaxed.

italki wasn't letting me submit this as one entry, so I had to split my correction. I'm sorry!! D:

Part 1:

A Normal Day

Hi, today i would like talk to about my day.

Well, (there is a natural pause here) today is Tuesday and .  (it's more appropriate to use a period here) i I got up at six-thirty in the morning, My breakfast were was
a piece of fried Chicken, two eggs also fried two fried eggs or two eggs (also fried), one piece of bread, guacamole and cofee, coffee. (it's more appropriate to use a period here) l like coffee but yesterday I don´t bought didn't buy milk and sugar, so gone black coffee (this is unclear, I suggest: so I drank my coffee black). Then I went to an interview for a job (consider job interview), but they told me that I be was young (consider very young or too young for clarity) and I don´t have xperience experience (consider enough experience for clarity).