I am an engineer !

I'm an engineer for Shipbuilding. My major work is a estimation of Vessels including analysis of hull structure.

when i was a child, i had been living in Pusan, it is the biggest port city in korea. sometimes i invited the shipyard which my grand father was working at. i was impressed by a huge~ block of ship and a thundering noise from working.
i decided that "this is my way~!!"

so, i graduated in ocean engineering. and i'm working for a shipbiulding company.

thx for ur comment~

I'm An Engineer!  << 제목에중요한단어들을(명사, 대명사, 주요동사,형용사, 그리고부사) 대문자로써야합니다.

I'm an engineer and I work in shipbuilding. My primary job is to estimate and analyze the hull structure of large vessels.
>>>When i was a child, I lived in Pusan, it is the biggest port city in Korea. Sometimes i was invited to the shipyard where my grandfather worked. I was very impressed by the huge ships and the thundering noise coming from the men working.
Right then, I decided, "This is for me!".  This is why I graduated in ocean(anic?) engineering, and I'm working for a shipbiulding company today.

대문자의규칙공부하세요.  <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<  이나 없으면, 제가 수정하기 계속하지 않을 거에요.          

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.   

맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

제코멘트나  제안입니다.     

열쇠색을낸시4366으로만들었습니다. 도움이됐으면좋겠습니다. 

I am an engineer !

I'm an engineer of Shipbuilding. My major work is a estimation of Vessels including analysis of hull structure.

when i was a child, i had been living in Pusan, it is the biggest port city in korea. sometimes i invited the shipyard which my grand father was working there. i impressed a huge~ block of ship and a thundering noise from working.
i decided that "it is my way~!!"

so, i graduated in ocean engineering. and i'm working for shipbiulding company.


hi.!!

I am an engineer !

I'm an engineer of for Ship building. My major work is a estimation of Vessels including an analysis of hull structure. 

When I was a child, I had been living in Pusan,. It is the biggest port city in Korea. Sometimes I invited the shipyard which my grand father was working at there. i impressed a huge~ block of ship and a thundering noise from working. <---- What?
I decided that "it this is my way~!!" 

So, i graduated in ocean engineering., and I'm working for a shipbiulding company.