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unhappy morning i was not happy this morning, beacuse i got up at 7.00 and Sebla who is my chef supposed to be working at 7.00. she was 30 minutes late for her work. i had a big schedule today and i had to 30minutes late for my breakfast. Because of the time, Sebla didn't cook as good as usual. i had an very easy breakfast, that even made me more unhappier. by the way, my driver was 12 minutes late for his job. Everybody was late this morning.

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Unhappy Morning

i was not happy this morning1, beacuse I got up at 7.00am and Sebla who is my chef was supposed to be working at 7.002 at that time. She was 30 minutes late for her work3.  I  had have a big busy schedule today and I had to wait 30minutes for half hour late for my breakfast. Because of the time, Sebla didn't cook as good as usual because she was rushing.  I  had an very easy did not have a good breakfast.  This, that even made me more even unhappier.

By the way, my driver was 12 minutes late for his job. Everybody was late this morning.

I hope that this is just a story and not a real life page in your day because anyone reading this will think of you as some sort of "Leona Hemsley".   I am sure you won't know of her.  She's a Hotel business power woman in the US.  It is a not a flattering term.  In another words, to use a coarser slang, you are a bitch!  Anyway, great job in your writing to elicit such emotion from a reader.  Keep it up :)

1.  Here's a new phrase for you, it means the same. "I was not a happy camper this morning".

2.  Too many same words happening so soon make your writing dull.

3.  This is redundant.  It is understood.  She's your chef and obviously there working for you.

See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm for capitalization rules.

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An unhappy morning

 I was not happy this morning, beacuse i got up at 7.00 and Sebla ,  who is my chef, supposed to  be working work at 7.00. She was 30 minutes late for her work. I had a big schedule today.  and  i had to 30minutes late for my breakfast.  But i had to be late for my breakfast 30 minutes  .Because of  the time    her lateness ( use '' that'' hrer is ok too) . Sebla didn't cook as good as usual.  I had an a very easy breakfast, that  even made me more unhappy  unhappier. 

 By the way, my driver was 12 minutes late for his job. Everybody was late this morning.

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