May 31st  {We say thirty-first}

*Luggage is collective.

**"Strange" would mean that you find it "weird" rather than "foreign". In this case, "unfamiliar" is a more appropriate word to use.

***"Including "the" here would mean that you have specific games in mind to watch. If it's just games in general, then it's not needed.

May 31st

yay Ushiro, Seattle is a great place; watch out for traffic jams, but visit the Space Needle, find out what the wheedle is, go to Pike Place Market, have a cinnamon roll at the Grand Central Bakery in Pioneer Square, look underfoot downtown and see the purple glass squares in the sidewalk, walk along Capitol hill streets and see the brass dancesteps underfoot, ride a ferryboat, go up into the mountains, eat Pacific Northwest smoked salmon, learn how to say 'the mountain is out' (=Mount Rainier is not covered by clouds), drink a Redhook at the Comet Tavern, visit the Sound Garden sculpture... and enjoy yourself, hopefully it won't rain too much!  Nice job on your text too, I made a few suggestions, safe travels and good luck with those bags.

May 31th

I will fly to Seattle tomorrow. I am visiting there for the first time (it will be my first visit). I have a lot of luggage, so I am worried that I will not be able to take it on board the plane. I want to put them in the overhead bin and under the seat. Seattle is strange to me but I will meet my friends there. I'm looking forward to watching the baseball games (or simply watching baseball) and going to my first Starbucks (unless you mean the first one built, then "the first Starbucks" is correct)