Correction please :Me as a teacher

Remarks:

1. Well done! Personally, I prefer highlighted corrections and comments, so that is what I've done here. If it is a bit too much color, please excuse me. :)

2. Try to avoid run-on sentences. A comma cannot take the place of a period or semi-colon. 

3.You wrote,  "...I am person who has a good sense of humor, optimistic and motivated..." Please note the importance of maintaining a parallel structure. The items in your series can be adjectives, nouns, verbs, participles, infinitives, subordinate clauses...whatever. The important thing is that they are all of the same type. We actually could write this sentence another way, using three adjectives in a series: My pupils find that I am humorous, optimistic, and motivated. 

4. You wrote, "... the knowledge and vision that my reading gives me enhances my teaching skills..." There might be disagreement on this point, so let me tell you my opinion:  You have a compound subject here and must conjugate the verb accordingly. I find it helpful, just for the sake of analysis, to break down the sentence into its core elements (omitting the words and clauses that add flavor to your message but do not carry the meaning). In this case, it would be: "Knowledge and vision enhance skills." You could not say, "Knowledge and vision enhances skills."

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Correction please :Me as a teacher

Few small additional corrections.

My name is Soufiane. I am 25 years old. I am Moroccan. I teach languages at the Language Institute in Agadir and on the internet as well. My pupils find that I am a person who has a good sense of humor, is optimistic and motivated. I like to read. The knowledge and vision that reading gives me enhances my teaching skills and ability to explain things in a simple way.

Correction please :Me as a teacher