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USA for Africa
In the last few days I have written here about some bands that changed the music world in the past. Today, I am going to write about an occasional* band composed of some of the most famous artists of the 80s. Rock, pop and soul legends, who met only one time to record a song and the proceeds were donated to help Africa, especially Ethiopia.
The song became a hit, which got to number one on the charts in most countries in the world. Everyone who lived the 80s can remember that song. Even now, I feel good when I hear the wonderful voices of Michael Jackson, Cindy Lauper, Paul Simon, Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen, Kim Carnes, Ray Charles, Tina Turner, etc... I must confess, that I love them. I feel nostalgia of that decade that now seems so far away. I think music then was before much better than today. The stars from before were really stars and had real talent. They were artists and worked hard to be good musicians. I'm sorry but don't think the same about the music stars from today. Surely I am getting old...
I don't want to finish this composition without mentioning the most wonderful voice of that legendary song** in 1985. I mean the great Stevie Wonder. Nobody could sing like him.
*occasional doesn't sound right in this context. not sure what you're trying to get across.
**again, meeting doesn't sound right, and I couldn't tell what you were trying to get across
Hope this was helpful!
USA for Africa
In recent days I have written here about some bands which changed the music world in the past. Today, I am going to write about a one-off band composed of some of the most famous artists of the 80s. Rock, pop and soul legends, who met just one time to record a song, the profits from which would be destined to help Africa and especially Ethiopia.That song became a hit, which got to number one in the charts in most countries in the world. Everybody alive during the 80s can remember that song. Still now, I feel good when I hear those wonderful voices of Michael Jackson, Cindy Lauper, Paul Simon, Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen, Kim Carnes, Ray Charles, Tina Turner, etc... I must confess that I love them. I feel nostalgic for that decade, that seems to me now so far away. I think music used to be much better than today and the stars from before were really stars and they really had talent. They were artists and worked hard to be good musicians. I'm sorry but I don't think the same about the music stars from today. Sure I am getting old...
I don't want to finish this composition/draft without mentioning also the most wonderful voice of that legendary meeting in 1985. I mean the great Stevie Wonder. Nobody could sing like him.
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