May 23th
I was invited to dinner by my senior colleagues. We went for Chinese restaurant. At first, we drank Chintao beers, which I had not gotten for a long time. We ordered spring rolls, fried noodles, spareribs and so on, and then ate them while talking to each other.
We were from several prefectures of Japan, and It was interested for me that the different prefectures had the different cultures. For example, some of them had private high schools better than prefectural high schools but the other were opposite.
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May 23th
I was invited to dinner by my senior colleagues.We went for to Chinese restaurant.
[We went to a Chinese restaurant / We went for a Chinese ]
At first, we drank Chintao beers, which I had not gotten had for a long time.
[Had is more natural here. Got doesn't sound right]
We ordered spring rolls, fried noodles, spareribs and so on, and then ate them while talking to each other.
We were from several prefectures* of Japan,
And I it was interested for me that the different prefectures had the different cultures.
And to me, it was interesting that the different prefectures had [such] different cultures [ You can use 'such' here, to show a large difference]
For example, some of them had private high schools better than prefectural high schools but the other were opposite.
For example, whilst some of them had private high school that were better than prefectural high schools, others did not.
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Good paragraph. Difficult sentence also. Only small changes made.
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May 23th
I was invited to dinner by my senior colleagues. We went to a Chinese restaurant. At first, we drank Chintao beer, which I had not had in a long time. We ordered spring rolls, fried noodles, spareribs and so on, and then ate as we talked to each other.We were from several different prefectures of Japan, and I found it interesting that the different prefectures had different cultures. For example, some of them had private high schools that were better than their prefectural high schools, while others did not.
Really great piece of writing! I hope my corrections helped you. If you have time, please correct my Japanese notebook. Thank you!
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