Hello World!
Now I have started my diary. I have always being told, that diary in English will improve my knowledges, but have no time. I try to write anything here every week (if don't forget to do this). Later I will check my abilities in the language. I hope, I will be better in English.
-About me.
When I was writing this I was 16-years old Russian schoolboy. Unfortunately, English classes are not so good and I haven't enogh skills to speak in this language. To know English today is absolutely nessessery for educated person (whom I want to be).
-Why I need in English?
Russia is very concervative country and I don't like most people who live there and in my town(I live in 90 000 population town). Yes, in capital situation is much better, but the best solution is to move out of the country in English-speaking one. And it worth many efforts to do this, one of them is the English language. But it is not the only reason, I want to be programmist and most part of information about this scope write in English. So, to know English is my professional requirement. And I want to comunicate with other people in this world, to learn about their culture. Many clever people speak in English.
-Conclusion.
I hope, you will help me in this way.
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Hello World!
Now I have started my diary/I am starting my diary today. I am always being told that a diary in English will/I have always been told, that a diary in English would improve my knowledge, but I have no time. I will try to write something here every week (as long as I don't forget to do it). Later I will check my abilities in the language/Later on, I will test my English skills to see if I have improved. I hope I will be better in English/I hope my English will be better.-About me.
When I was writing this I was 16-years old Russian schoolboy/As I am writing this, I am a 16-year-old Russian schoolboy. Unfortunately, my English classes are not that good and I don't have enough skill to speak this language/Unfortunately, the English classes offered, are not very good, so I am not that fluent. To know/Knowing English today is absolutely necessary for an educated person (who I want/wish to be).
-Why I need [ ] English?
Russia is a very conservative country and I don't like most people who live here and in my town (I live in a town with a population of 90,000). Yes, in the capital the situation is much better, but the best solution for me is to move out of the country to an English-speaking one. And it requires a lot of effort to do this, such as learning the English language. But that is not the only reason, I want to be a programmer and most [ ] of the information in this field is written in English. So, knowing English is a professional requirement (for me). [ ]/Also/Furthermore/Finally I want to communicate with other people in this/the world, to learn/world and learn about their culture/different cultures. Many clever people speak [ ]English.
-Conclusion.
I hope[ ] you will help me [ ] this way/I hope that you can help me improve my English.
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