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Intent Letter for Canada trip Dear Sir/Madam: My name is Fabiola Salvestrini, I live in São Paulo with my relatives (Mother and brother). I ‘m Biologist and recently I also became an Environmental Engineer working with environmental issues on a consulting company, and currently occupying the position of Environmental Analyst. I’m applying for Temporary Resident Visa for visit my friends Giovana, Rafael and their son, who have been in Toronto, Canada since 2015, and also to do some tourism because I will be on vacation from my job, which has already been approved for the whole duration of this trip. In addition It will be a great opportunity to see new landscape (like Coniferous Forest, Tundra, Boreal Forest and Praire) and different wildlife in a round trip from east to west side, since I’m Master on Biological Science, Ecology area. Besides, it always will be a pleasure to know another culture, country, meet new people and I also look forward to have that experience. Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.

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Intent Letter for Canada trip

Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Fabiola Salvestrini, I live in São Paulo with my mother and brother. I‘m a Biologist and recently I also became an Environmental Engineer working on environmental issues for a consulting company, currently holding the position of Environmental Analyst.

I wish to apply for a Temporary Residents Visa to visit my friends Giovana, Rafael and their son who have been in Toronto, Canada since 2015, and also to do some tourism because I will be on vacation from my job, which has already been approved for the whole duration of this trip.

Please see attached (if via email) 

Please see enclosed (if by normal mail) the relevant documents from the job that proof you have been accepted for a job.

If there are any questions please contact me via 

(now give details of how they can contact you)

Kind regards

or whatever salutation you chose or are advised to use for Canada

You need a different style of a letter for officialdom

the company you will be working for should assist you with this.

Giovana, Rafael and their son who have <-- for this sentence you need to remove the comma",".

because that's the correct way to write a list no comma after the penultimate thing on the list.


also, you are confusing sending an informal letter to friends family etc with sending an official request.

get straight to the point and wait for them to reply back with the procedure they require you to go through.

or just phone the Canadian permit department first and do as they ask. 

they haven't the time to read about how you will enjoy their wilderness


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Intent Letter for Canada trip

Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Fabiola Salvestrini, I live in São Paulo with my relatives (Mother and brother). I ‘m a Biologist and recently I also became an Environmental Engineer working on with environmental issues in a consulting company, and currently occupying the position of Environmental Analyst.

I’m applying for a Temporary Resident Visa to for visit my friends Giovana, Rafael and their son, who have been in Toronto, Canada since 2015, and also to do some sightseeing tourism because I will be on vacation from my job, which has already been approved for the whole duration of this trip.

In addition, it will be a great opportunity to see new landscapes (like coniferous forests,  the tundra, boreal forests and the prairie) and different wildlife in a round trip from east to west side, since I have a I’m Masters in Biological Science, and Ecology area. Besides, it always will be a pleasure to get to  know another culture, and country, meet new people and I also look forward to having that experience.
Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.
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Intent Letter for Canada trip

Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Fabiola Salvestrini, I live in São Paulo with my relatives (mother and brother). I‘m a biologist and recently I also became an environmental engineer working with on environmental issues on with a consulting company.   I currently occupying the position of Environmental Analyst.**


I’m applying for a Temporary Resident Visa in order to for visit my friends Giovana, Rafael and their son, who have been in Toronto, Canada since 2015. and I also want to do some tourist activities tourism because I will be on vacation from my job, which has already been approved for the whole duration of this trip.

In addition it will would be a great opportunity to see new landscapes (like the coniferous forest, tundra, boreal forest and the prairies) and different wildlife in a round trip from the east to west coast side, since I have a Master of on Biological Science in Ecology area . Besides, it is always will be a pleasure to get to know another culture, country, meet new people. and I also look forward to having this that experience.
Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.


**Capital letters are correct here, since you are naming your official position title.


Very nice!  I hope you enjoy Canada :)

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Hi JJ. I'm going to Banff and Jasper, after I'm planing to go to Vancouver and come back to Toronto, but now the price of dollar is rising (a pity). I'm a little doubt if I should go to Vancouver from Jasper by bus or if I should go to Edmonton and get a flight to Vancouver....Well, I hope I can afford for this trip...it would be a great adventure to go to the fantastic westside. Thanks for your advice, so nice of you! :)
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