My new goal
Hello friends! From today I have a new goal: write three essays (of 200-300 words each) every week in this workbook because I would like to improve my English skills. Could you help me and correct my mistakes?
My name is Daniel, but everybody call me Dani. I’m 29 years old and I live in Barcelona with my girlfriend, concretely in the neighborhood of Poblenou, very near from the beach and I love animals and sports.
We have two little dogs: their names are Leia (like princess Leia of Star Wars) and Noa, and they are two little Yorkshire Terrier of two years old each. Noa is a little bigger than Leia and she loves run in the park’s grass with her ball. Leia is quieter than Noa… and she loves sleep on my legs when I am watching TV.
I go four times a week to the gymnasium and I like to do weight training and run. Some years ago I was a good swimmer, but now I don’t have swimming pool in the gym and there is not a pool near my home. This summer I would like to improve my skills with calisthenics and to do workouts in the beach!
See you in the next essays, was a pleasure practice English with you!
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Hello friends! From today I have a new goal: write three essays (of 200-300 words each) every week in this workbook because I would like to improve my English skills. Could you help me and correct my mistakes? My name is Daniel, but everybody calls me Dani. I’m 29 years old and I live in Barcelona with my girlfriend, concretely specifically in the neighborhood of Poblenou, very near from the beach and I love animals and sports. We have two little dogs: their names are Leia (like princess Leia of Star Wars) and Noa, and they are two little two year oldYorkshire Terriers of two years old each. Noa is a little bigger than Leia and she loves run in the park’s grass with her ball. Leia is quieter than Noa… and she loves to sleep on my legs when I am watching TV. I go four times a week to the gymnasium four times a week and I like to do weight training and run. Some years ago I was a good swimmer, but now I don’t have a swimming pool in the gym and there is not a pool near my home. This summer I would like to improve my skills with calisthenics and to do workouts in on the beach! See you in the next essays, it was a pleasure practicing English with you!
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Hello friends! From today I have a new goal: to write three essays (of 200-300 words each) every week in this workbook because I would like to improve my English skills. Could you help me to correct my mistakes?
My name is Daniel, but everybody calls me Dani. I’m 29 years old and I live in Barcelona with my girlfriend,concretely specifically in the neighborhood of Poblenou, very close to the beach. and I love animals and sports.
We have two little dogs: their names are Leia (like princess Leia of Star Wars) and Noa, and they are two little Yorkshire Terriers who are both two years oldeach. Noa is a little bigger than Leia and she loves to run in the grass at the park with her ball. Leia is quieter than Noa… and she loves to sleep on my legs when I am watching TV.
I go four times a week to the gym (no one really uses the word gymnasium in everyday speech) and I like to do weight training and run. A few years ago I was a good swimmer, but now I don’t have a swimming pool in the gym and there is not a pool near my home. This summer I would like to improve my skills in calisthenics and to do workouts at the beach!
See you in the next essay, it was a pleasure to practice English with you!
My name is Daniel, but everybody calls me Dani. I’m 29 years old and I live in Barcelona with my girlfriend,
We have two little dogs: their names are Leia (like princess Leia of Star Wars) and Noa, and they are two little Yorkshire Terriers who are both two years old
I go four times a week to the gym (no one really uses the word gymnasium in everyday speech) and I like to do weight training and run. A few years ago I was a good swimmer, but now I don’t have a swimming pool in the gym and there is not a pool near my home. This summer I would like to improve my skills in calisthenics and to do workouts at the beach!
See you in the next essay, it was a pleasure to practice English with you!
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