Patito Feo (The Ugly Duckling) - Part 2
On April 8th 2007, the first performance of Patito Feo took place in the city of Buenos Aires, where they sung the musics from the first Album of the series to more than 24.000 people, as a promotion of its premiere on television.
The sound tracks of Patito Feo were the more sold in Argentina in 2007 and 2008 consecutively. They won awards such as Best Children's Album, for the Gardel Awards, and The Best children’s Fiction for the Martín Fierro Awards, apart from that they won 11 platinum disc with “Patito Feo: La historia más linda” (The Most Beautiful Story), followed by Patito Feo en el Teatro (Patito Feo on theater)
And y La vida es una fiesta (Life's a party), which become an international bestseller. During the four musical tour of Patito Feo, Laura Esquivel and Brenda Asnicar was able to perform with the cast of the series to more than 1 million of people.
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Patito Feo (The Ugly Duckling) - Part 2
On April 8th 2007, the first performance of Patito Feo (1) took place in the city of Buenos Aires, where they sung the musics songs from their first album of the series to more than 24.000 people, as a promotion of its to accompany the premiere of the series on television.The sound tracks of Patito Feo were the more most sold albums in Argentina in 2007 and 2008 consecutively. They won awards such as Best Children's Album, for the Gardel Awards, and The Best children’s Fiction for the Martín Fierro Awards, (2)apart from that they won 11 platinum disc with “Patito Feo: La historia más linda” (The Most Beautiful Story), followed by Patito Feo en el Teatro (Patito Feo on in the theater)
And(3) y La vida es una fiesta (Life's a party), which became an international bestseller. During the four musical tours of Patito Feo, Laura Esquivel and Brenda Asnicar was were able to perform with the cast of the series to more than 1 million of people.
1)It'd be good to introduce what is Patito Feo in this context . As I understand it, you're now talking about a music band, but on part one it was a TV series.
2)I'd divide the sentence in two. "Martín Fierro Awards. Moreover, they won 11 platinum discs..."
3) While it's ok to start a sentence with "and" and "but" in an informal text, the more formal the text, the more frowned upon it is to start with "and" or "but." For an informal text it's
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Patito Feo (The Ugly Duckling) - Part 2
On April 8th 2007, the first performance of Patito Feo took place in the city of Buenos Aires, where they sung the musics from the first Album of the series to more than 24.,000 people, as a promotion of its premiere on television.The sound tracks of Patito Feo were the more most sold (albums) in Argentina in 2007 and 2008 consecutively. They won awards such as Best Children's Album, for the Gardel Awards, and The Best children’s Fiction for the Martín Fierro Awards, apart from that they won 11 platinum disc (apart from winning best platinum disc?)* with “Patito Feo: La historia más linda” (The Most Beautiful Story), followed by Patito Feo en el Teatro (Patito Feo on in theater)
And y La vida es una fiesta (Life's a party), which become became an international bestseller. During the fourth musical tour of Patito Feo, Laura Esquivel and Brenda Asnicar was were able to perform with the cast of the series to more than 1 million of people.
* I wasn't sure exactly what you meant
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