A Picnic
I like picnic. I had a wonderful memory of picnic though I have few experience about that.
Once, my mother proposed to have a picnic on The Elephant Mountain, which is near to the landmark, Taipei 101. My father and my sister agreed with that directly, while I wasn't enthusiastic about that proposal. My mother forced me to do some favor of this activity, so I baked some cookies. My mom prepared some fruit, such as apple, guava and strawberry, and my sister made salad. On the other hand, my father's duty was driving the car and loading over the heavy thing on his back.
The Elephant Mountain wasn't a big challenge for even elder and kid, because it just looks like a hill from a distance. Although it is a small mountain, the plant and insects really amazed me, who seldom close to the nature. We enjoyed our delicious food in the smooth wind and brillent sunshine. I though every sweat was wealthy when I stood on the top of the mountain, feasting my eyes with the scene of Taipei 101.
The happy memory let me learn two thing. The first thing is preparing can give you sweet gain. The second thing is reminding me how lucky I am for having fun with my family. I guess the reason of why that experience of picnic was so fascinating to me was that was related with my favorite people.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
A Picnic
I like to picnic*. I have a wonderful memory of a picnic (though I have few experience about that?).Once, my mother proposed to have a picnic on The Elephant Mountain, which is near to the Taipei 101 landmark. My father and my sister immediately agreed, but I was not enthusiastic. My mother forced me to do something towards it, so I baked some cookies. My mom prepared some fruit; apples, guavas and strawberries, and my sister made salad. For his part, my father was to drive us there, and carry the provisions in a back pack.
The Elephant Mountain wasn't a big challenge for even kids or the elderly, although it looks like a hill from a distance. Although it is a small mountain, the plants and insects really amazed me, and we were seldom this close to nature**. We enjoyed our delicious food in the gentle breeze and brilliant sunshine. I thought every sweet was tasty*** when I stood on the top of the mountain, feasting my eyes over the Taipei 101 scenery.
That happy memory taught me two things. The first thing is preparing can give you sweet gain****. The second was to remind me of how lucky I am to have had such fun with my family. I guess why that picnic was so fascinating to me was that it was bound up with my favorite people.
*or, I like picnics.
**, *** if this was your meaning?
****?
Very well written, if a little obscure in parts.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
