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help me pleas it's an subject important for me it's an letter dear laura thank you for your letter , sorry for not answerring you quichly , i had a lot of exams. i am verru happy to telle you about one of our strange celebrations achoura well , each yerar on the 10 of moharram we cwlebrate achoura . it is a religious celebration in which we do a lot of activities . a few days befor parents would bye toys and dolls for their children . on the day , fa;ilies gather to gather to have speacial meals and offers almas to the poors , street celebrations ,. so as you see adults consider achoura a religious and cultiral occasions ehil kids consider it a day of fun . pleas would you give my best regard to all your family by for now

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Dear Laura,

Thank you for your letter. Sorry for not answering you quickly, I had a lot of exams. I am very happy to tell you about one of our strange celebrations Achoura well. (I'm not so sure what you mean by "well") Each year on the 10th of moharram, we celebrate Achoura. It is a religious celebration in which we do a lot of activities. A few days before, parents would buy toys and dolls for their children. On the day, families gather together to have special meals and offers almas to the poors. street celebrations ,. So As you see, adults consider Achoura a religious and cultural occasions ehil(I believe you meant "and") kids consider it a day of fun. Best regards to all your family. Bye for now.

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Help me please. It's an important subject for me. It's a letter

Dear Laura,

Thank you for your letter. Sorry for not answering you quickly. I had a lot of exams.
I am very happy to tell you about one of our strange celebrations,  Achoura.

Well, each year on the 10th of Moharram, we celebrate Achoura. It is a religious celebration in which we do a lot of activities. A few days before, parents would buy toys and dolls for their children. On the day, families gather to gather to have special meals, and offers almas to the poors, and have street celebrations.
So as you see, adults consider Achoura a religious and cultural occasions ehil and kids consider it a day of fun.
Please, would you give my best regards to all your family.
Bye for now.
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.help me pleas it's an subject important for me it's an letter

Dear Laura,

Thank you for your letter. Sorry for not answerring you quickly. I had a lot of exams.
I am very happy to telle you about one of our strange celebrations called achoura.

Well , each yerar on the 10 of moharram we celebrate achoura . It is a religious celebration in which we do a lot of activities . a few days before, parents will would buy toys and dolls for their children . On this day , families gather to gather to have speacial meals, and offers almas to the poors , and have street celebrations ,.
so as you see, adults consider achoura a religious and cultiral occasions while kids consider it a day of fun .
please would you give my best regards to all your family.
Bye for now,

Salma


*I did not correct all of the spelling mistakes- hopefully screen shows when you have a spelling error and you can use a spell check or a dictionary..

*Also remember to use a Capital letter as the first letter of each word that starts a sentence- there are a few that I corrected and a few that I did not.


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