Translation of an Arabic poem: I translated this poem from Arabic, is it acceptable english ?
I walked out of the hallway after a week of exams that beat me
a dazzling expended light confused my eyes and heat me
it’s the light of the one her love honored me
does she get more beauty each time I look at her ?
or my missing of her presence make me crazy on her
does she get more moral every time I contemplate her ?
and she get more shyness which makes her ignoring me
She is like a sunrise in a new morning enjoying me
She is like a perfect moon, in a silent night that bring tranquility
In her eyes the love and the trust, also the modesty that makes me loving her
I never saw girl like her, even in my best fantasy
She is amazing, beautiful, clever and lovely
Her love makes me down, I found myself dreaming about her
She is the only one, that can always make me smile
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Translation of an Arabic poem: I translated this poem from Arabic, is it acceptable english ?
I walked out of the hallway after a week of exams that beat me with a dazzling expended light, which confused my eyes and warmed heat me.it’s the light of the one her I love. She honored me with her light.
does she get more beauty beautiful each time I look at her ?
or my missing longing of her presence makes me crazy on for her
does she get more moral perfect every time I contemplate her ?
and but she gets more shyness which makes her ignoring ignore me
She is like a sunrise in of a new morning enjoying me that I enjoy
She is like a perfect moon, in a silent night that brings tranquility
In her eyes the are love and the trust, also and the modesty that makes me loving love her
I never saw a girl like her, even in my best fantasy
She is amazing, beautiful, clever and lovely
Her love makes me grounded down, I find found myself dreaming about her
She is the only one, that can always make me smile
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