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Supermarket
I waked woke up at 6:00a.m. After taking a bath1, I decided to go to Carrefour where I spent about RMB300 and went back came home with 4 big plastic bags of things. I walked about 10mins with the Took me about 10 minutes to walk with these heavy things before At the beginning,I remenbered realizing that I just wanted to bought buy some daily things. articles for daily use.Why did am I now owning 4 big plastic bags full of stuff.things2? Crazy! It is takes me about half past one hour one and a half hours tp walk from my home to walk to Carrefour. And there is not No bus or subway for me to take. Now I am standing for standed about 20mins to waiting for a taxi. It was about 11am when I got back. When I
arrived home it is about 11p.m.How What a waste of time!
1. Most probably you took a shower. In the US, taking a bath means to "soak" yourself in a tub of water.
2. In good writing, try not to use the same word too often and in close proximity unless making rhetoric emphasis.
See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm for your punctuation spacing errors.
Supermarket
I waked up at 6:00p.m.After taking a bath,I decided to go to Carrefour.I spent about RMB300 and went back home with 4 big plastic bags things.I walked about 10mins with the heavy things.At the beginning,I remenbered I just want to baught some articles for daily use.Why did I own 4 big plastic bags things?Crazy!It is about half past one hour from my home to walk to Carrefour.And there is not bus or subway.I standed about 20mins to waitingfor a taxi.When I
arrived home it is about 11p.m.How waste of time!
I woke up at 6 in the evening. After taking a bath, I decided to go to Carrefour. I spent around RMB300 took back home 4 big plastic bags full of all those things i neaded and didn't need. I had gone to buy only necessory things for daily usage but i didn't realise when i got 4 big packages. Crazy isn't it!! It takes around an hour and half to walk back home and sadly no buses or subway. I had to wait around 20 mins for a taxi to catch and reached back home about 11 in the night. Such a wastage of time!!
*6 am represents morning and 6 pm is evening
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