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Daily story -- A warm man , a charming city Today I witness a warm moment . And now I want to share the story to you .

I went downstairs and crossed the street to throw my household garbage cause the garbage can is over there at about 7 pm . And l saw a blind person walked over the street with his guide rod who seems to be as old as my grandpa when I waited the traffic signal . Soon he seemed to lose the way and stopped . At the time a man who rided with motorcycle stopped and asked the blind grandpa where he wants to go and leaded him to the right way when I was still thinking about maybe the blind man needs help and I should go to help him . The man did what I wanted to do and the moment makes me warm .

In fact I came to work in this city about two weeks ago and now I feel the charm of this city the warm of citizens in the city . I guess I will love this city .

A beautiful day ! Love you !

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Daily story -- A warm man , a charming city

Today I witnessed a warm moment . And now I want to share the story to you .

I went downstairs about 7pm, and crossed the road to throw out my household garbage because the garbage can is there. Waiting for the traffic signal, l saw a blind man crossing the road with his guide stick, who seemed to be as old as my grandpa. Soon he seemed to lose his way and stopped . At the time a man on a motorcycle suddenly stopped and asked the blindman where he wanted to go and led him the right way, all this when I was still thinking about maybe the blind man needs help and I should go to help him. The man did what I wanted to do and the moment makes me warm .

In fact I came to work in this city about two weeks ago and now I feel the charm of this city and the warmth of its citizens. I guess I will love this city .

A beautiful day ! Love you !

Very well written!

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Daily story -- A warm man , a charming city

Today I witness witnessed a warm moment . And now I want to share the story to you .

I went downstairs and crossed the street to throw my household garbage cause (Because. 'Cause is aceptable in informal writing, like when you're chatting with friends in weixin)  the garbage can  garbage truck is over there at about 7 pm . And l saw a blind person walked walking (when you saw him he was still performing that action. When you say way walked, it implies he wasn't walking when you saw him) over* the street with his guide rod (guide rod isn't wrong because many people don't actually know the name of that stick and the term is you use is very clear. I myself didn't know, but the "right" name is white cane) who seems to be as old as my grandpa when I waited at the traffic signal. Soon he seemed to lose the (his would be better)  way and stopped . At the time a man who rided with was riding a motorcycle stopped and asked the blind grandpa where he wants to go and leaded led him to the right way when I was still thinking about maybe the blind man needs help and I should go to help him . The man did what I wanted to do  and the moment makes me warm 

In fact I came to work in this city about two weeks ago and now I feel the charm of this city the warm of citizens in the city . I guess I will love this city .

A beautiful day ! Love you !

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Thank you very much .
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Fascinating. I thought only Taipei had that system where you have to go to the garbage truck to throw your trash.
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