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souvenir my campus life I can't forget those things and people . I miss this three years , which is previous for me, spent with my classmates in campus. Life flies like an arrow. Three years is so short. Whereas, there are so many things waiting for me to finish. I have no time to say good bye to my tearchers even. I will engrave it forever

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souvenir My Campus Life Souvenirs

I can't forget those things and the people.  I miss this those past three years , which is previous for me, spent spending time with my classmates in campus. Life flies like an arrow. Those three years is were so short. Whereas, there are so many things waiting for me to finish so that I have no time don't even have the time to say good bye to my tearchers even. I will engrave it forever My campus life souvenirs will forever engraved in my mind.

Good creative writing but you need more work in expressing them.

Read http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm on capitalization and

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm on punctuation spacing

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