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Atrasado ônibus Ônibus atrasado
Hoje é terça feira terça-feira e foi um dia interessante. Meu ônibus estava atrasado então eu tive que andar 2 milhas para a até à estação de trem. Eu estava muito cansado cansada depois de andar.Comments:
1) Atrasado ônibus: it's not really a mistake, but in this case it's better write the adjective "atrasado" after the noun "ônibus";
2) terça feira: In Brazilian Portuguese, all the weekdays got an hyphen, e.g. Monday = segunda-feira
3) para a: The verb "andar" with the meaning of to go somewhere requests the adverb até. Furthermore, In Brazilian Portuguese there is a phenomenon called "crase". It's when the preposition "a" and the article "a" are written together to became "à". There're a bunch of grammar rules to use it. Even natives like me got mistakes when using "crase" hahaha.
4) cansado: In Brazilian Portuguese some words are diversified in masculine and feminine. In this case,
Eu estava muito cansado = I was very tired (MASCULINE)
Eu estava muito cansada = I was very tired (FEMININE)
You got some minor mistakes and your text is fully understandable. I would say any native speaker could read it and comprehend it without any effort.
I hope I could help you,
Victor.
Ônibus atrasado
Ônibus Atrasado
Hoje é terça feira e foi um dia interessante. Meu ônibus estava atrasado, então, eu tive que andar 3,22 km até a estação de trem. Eu estava muito cansada depois de andar muito.Want to progress faster?
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