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A greedy dog Please correct my English mistakes Onced, a dog was very hungry. He found a loaf of bread. He wanted to enjoy the bread the fullest. Hence he went towards the river to desire of sitting alone and having it. There was a small bridge over the river. When the dog was crossing the river, he saw himself in shadow in the water. He thought of another dog and planned to snachted his bread. As soon he opened his mouth to bark and snatched another dog's bread as his bread fall down in the river and float. He remained hungry.

Hence its called that we should not be greedy. We should be happy and satisfied whatever we had.

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A Greedy Dog Please correct my English mistakes

Onced, there was a hungry dog was very hungry. He and found a loaf of bread. He It wanted to enjoy the bread to the fullest. Hence he So it went towards the river to to enjoy it  desire of sitting alone and having it. There was a small bridge over the river. When the dog was crossing the river, he it also saw his reflection himself in shadow in the water. He thought of that there was another dog in the water and planned it thought the other dog was going to snachted snatch its his bread. As soon he it opened his mouth to bark and to snatched the another dog's bread, it's own as his bread fall down fell into the river and floated away. He The dog remained hungry.

Hence its called that The moral of the story is we that should not never be greedy. We should Be happy and be satisfied with whatever we havehad.


This story also appears in Aesop's Fables.

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A Greedy Dog 

Once a dog was famished. It found a loaf of bread and wanted to enjoy the bread to its fullest. Desiring to be alone and to consume the roti, it went towards the river. There was a small bridge over the river. When the dog was crossing the river, it saw a reflection of itself in the water. It thought the shimmering image was another dog and planned to snatch its bread. As soon as the real dog opened its mouth to bark and snatch the other dog's bread, the bread in his mouth fell down into the river and floated away. He remained starved.

We should not be greedy. We should be happy and satisfied with whatever we have.

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A greedy dog Please correct my English mistakes

Once a dog was very hungry. He found a loaf of bread. He wanted to enjoy the bread to the fullest. Hence he went to the river so that he can be alone and have the bread by himself. There was a small bridge over the river. When the dog was crossing the river, he saw his shadow in the water. He thought that another dog wanted to snatch his bread. As soon he opened his mouth to bark and to snatch another dog's bread his bread fell down the river and floated away. He remained hungry.
Hence it is said that we should not be greedy. We should be happy and satisfied with whatever we have.
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Yes, it is a Indian fable.
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Is that an Indian fable? Good job!

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