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星期六和星期天你会做什么? 下个星期六在俄罗斯不是休息日。所以我应该在那天去上班。但是我不会去上班。因为我会坐飞机去别的城市。星期天麻将比赛在那个城市的酒店开始。我将参加这个麻将比赛。我已经预订了那个酒店。我从机场会坐出租车到酒店。因为这是我第一次来这个城市,所以我要去观光还要尝尝当地的菜。星期天我会一天到晚打麻将。

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星期六和星期天你会做什么?

下个星期六不是俄罗斯的休息日,所以那天我应该去上班,但是我不会去上班,因为我会坐飞机去别的城市。星期天麻将比赛将在那个城市的酒店举办,我将参加这个麻将比赛。我已经预订了那个酒店。我会从机场坐出租车到酒店。因为这是我第一次来这个城市,所以我要去观光还要尝尝当地的菜。星期天我会从早到晚打麻将。

1. In Mandarin, the preposition for time "在" is not as widely used as in English. In writing,  a more natural way is to put the bare temporal (time) noun at the beginning of the whole sentence (but after the conjunction, esp. "所以那天").

2. The punctation comma “,” is much more widely used in Chinese than English. You can joint several individual sentences by comma, as long as the topic doesn't change. (Not very strict rules. If you want, you can continuously use commas in a whole paragraph.)

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星期六和星期天你会做什么?

下个星期六在俄罗斯不是休息日。所以我应该在那天去上班。但是我不会去上班。因为我会坐飞机去别的城市。星期天麻将比赛在那个城市的酒店开始。我将参加这个麻将比赛。我已经预订了那个酒店。我从机场会坐出租车到酒店。因为这是我第一次来这个城市,所以我要去观光还要尝尝当地的菜。星期天我会一天到晚打麻将。


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在俄罗斯,下周六不是休息日,照理说我应该去上班。但是我有别的安排,我要在那天飞去别的城市。下周日在那里的一个酒店里有个麻将比赛,我准备去参加。我已经订了那个酒店。因为是第一次去那个城市,所以我准备在那里逛逛,并尝尝当地的美食。周日我会打一整天的麻将。

备注:

1. 你的中文很好了,你的目标应该是写得更简洁。

2. 中文的标点用法和英语有点不一样,感觉你的用法想写英语。不知道你的母语----俄语的标点用法是怎样的。

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O que você fará no sábado e no domingo?

O próximo sábado na Rússia não é um dia de descanso. Então provavelmente eu deveria ir trabalhar naquele dia. Mas eu não vou trabalhar. Pois eu viajarei para outras cidades. Naquele cidade, o domingo começa com Mahjongno no hotel . Eu vou participar deste jogo de mahjong. Eu já reservei o hotel. Vou pegar um táxi do aeroporto até o hotel. Quero ir passear e experimentar os pratos locais porque esta é a minha primeira vez nesta cidade. E eu vou jogar mahjong o dia todo no domingo.

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