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April 22, 2018 This winter in Toronto was too long to enjoy. The middle of April already passed but snow has been still falling til last week. But today's weather was warm enough and the sky was also incredibly beautiful, so my family went out to a park nearby to enjoy the gifted day. We played passing soccer ball on the grass and kids had a good time with their sand toys on the playground that they seemed happy after a long time. Due to some part of soil still soggy on the grass, my wife slipped as she was grabbing the soccer ball. I couldn't stop laughing(sorry honey). After enjoying fully afternoon, we had a light dinner without my wife. Since she decided to go on a diet despite I think her shape doesn't look bad, however, she will keep skipping dinner. The last activity, which was a hilarious game ever on today, was Jenga my little daughter's favorite one. One rule of the Jenga game we made is when a player who broke the Jenga building the player should perform as dancing with writing oneself's name by one's butt. I never lose playing Jenga with my kids. Obviously, the today's dancers were my son and daughter. At the moment, when my daughter was scared to remove one block of Jenga building, my wife wanted to help her so she tried to remove one which looked like unstable, and yes, she demolished it. And How was my wife's butt writing? I regret to forget recording it. lol. What a perfect day ever! I've always been wondering this peaceful day without any trouble so I was so happy today.

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April 22, 2018

This winter in Toronto was too long to enjoy. The middle of April already passed but snow has been was still falling til last week. But today's weather was warm enough and the sky was also incredibly beautiful, so my family went out to a park nearby to enjoy the gifted (gifted is normally use as a synonym for smart) day. We played passinged a soccer ball on the grass and kids had a good time with their sand toys on the playground that and they seemed happy after a long time. Due to some part of soil still soggy on the grass, my wife slipped as she was grabbing the soccer ball. I couldn't stop laughing(sorry honey). After enjoying fully ("fully" goes before) the afternoon, we had a light dinner without my wife. Since she decided to go on a diet despitesounds a little awkward, "even though" works I think her shape doesn't look bad, however, she will keep skipping dinner. The last activity, which was a hilarious game ever on today (do you mean this was the most fun activity today?), was Jenga , my little daughter's favorite one. One rule of the Jenga game we made is when a player who broke the Jenga building, the player should perform as dancing withdance while writing oneself's name by one's butt. I never lose playing Jenga with my kids. Obviously, the today's dancerstoday were my son and daughter. At the moment, when my daughter was scared to remove one block of Jenga building, my wife wanted to help her so she tried to remove one which looked like unstable, and yes, she demolished it. And How was my wife's butt writing? I regret to forget recording itforgetting to record it. lol.



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