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"This project collects the results of a study of training needs of the local police. The main objective is as such, identify the training needs that the local police presents, although other objectives have emerged, categorized as specific, which are 'Know the training experiences of the local police', 'Identify who offers training to the police local ',' Propose a training proposal addressed to the local police ',' Know the opinion of the local police about their training '. For this, an investigation has been carried out with a quantitative and qualitative methodology. In the first place, an interview was conducted with a police agent who is in charge of training at 'ESPA'. Subsequently, some quantitative questionnaires were passed on to local police officers from various towns in the metropolitan area of Seville. The results of the investigation are divided into three parts, the first for the descriptive data, the second for the correlational data, and the third for the qualitative data. After this analysis, the design of a training course focused on local police for a future improvement and satisfaction of them has been made".
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This project collects the results of a study of training needs for the local police. The main objectives are:
• Identify the training needs
• Identify past training experiences
• Identify who offers training
• Propose a training strategy addressing the local police needs
• Record the opinion of the local police about their training
To achieve the objectives, analysis has been carried out using a quantitative and qualitative methodology.
• An interview was conducted with a police agent who oversees training at 'ESPA'.
• Questionnaires were sent to local police officers from various towns in the metropolitan area of Seville.
The results of the investigation are divided into three parts:
• descriptive data
• correlation data
• qualitative data
After this analysis, the design of a training course, focused on local police for future improvement and approval by them, has been created.
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