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I'm on a diet. Could you check and correct my English please?

I work at a hospital as a dentist and I’m on diet now.

I exercised in a gym, which is on the 4th floor of the hospital, after I had finished my work today. It was so hard....

I know that the balance between exercise and calorie intake is important for dieting.

I like to eat meals, so I should exercise as well as eating.

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The visit to the dentist is more terrible than the visit to the gym, he-he. I sm going to visit both places tomorrow, by the way.. :) Keep on!
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I'm on a diet.

Could you check and correct my English please?

I work at a hospital as a dentist and I’m on a diet now. 

I exercised in a gym, which is on the 4th floor of the hospital, after I had finished my work today. It was so hard.

I know that the balance between exercise and calorie intake is important for dieting.

I like to eat meals, so I should exercise as well as eating.

*** Good work. I only made one small correction. 


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