Please correct my article, A misunderstanding
When I studied in junior high school, I had a fight with my classmate. However, the hurtest injury isn't the scab which she caused but my heart's breaking for not being trust by my parents.
We debated whose ideals were better in a group and both of us didn't want to make a compromise. Her criticism was so harsh, so I yelled at her to express my opinion. She got bent out of shape and she pulled me. I gave her a response with a harder hit. The classroom which was fulled of noise appealed teacher's attention. Unfortunately, the teacher came in to classroom while I was pulling back her.
Teacher informed our parents that we had a fight and what he described was I was the beginner. No matter how I tried to explain, dad and mom thought I was wrong for pulling her at first. I had to admit that it takes two to tango, so both of us were wrong. Whereas what I wanted them to realize was that I was not the beginner. At the moment my dad apoligizied to my teacher, I felt really disappointed because my parents didn't believe me.
I learned some lesson from this experience. For starter, never have an opinion at the situation that you aren' familiar because that might cause misunderstanding. Secondly, I shall listen my children's thought patiently when I group up.
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Please correct my article, A misunderstanding
When I was in junior high school, I had a fight with my classmate. However, the worst was not the cut she caused but my heart breaking for losing my parents' trust.We debated whose ideas were better in a group and both of us did not want to compromise. Her criticism was so harsh, so I yelled my opinion at her. She got bent out of shape and pulled me. I responsed with a harder hit. The classroom which was full of noise distracted the teacher's attention. Unfortunately, when the teacher returned he saw me pushing her back.
The teacher informed our parents that we had had a fight and as he described it, it was I who started it. No matter how I tried to explain, dad and mom thought I was wrong for pushing her first. I had to admit that it takes two to tango, so both of us were wrong. What I wanted them to realize was that I was not the instigator. At the moment my dad apologised to my teacher, I felt so disappointed because my parents didn't believe me.
I learned some lessons from this experience. For starters, never express an opinion about something that you aren't familiar with, because that might cause misunderstandings. Secondly, I shall listen to my children's thoughts patiently when I grow up.
Very well written!
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