A phenomenal week
I had many goals for last week. I didn't complete any of them, even though it was a phenomenal week.
You see, three family members who live in Spain many years ago came to Ecuador and the last week was their last week on the country, so the whole week was full of family activities.
We visited the Quilotoa Lake, a beautiful place that my cousin saw on the internet before coming to Ecuador.
They also visited the Middle of the World in Quito and Otavalo in the province of Imbabura. I couldn't go to those places because I had to work.
Anyway, we also prepared a lot of Ecuadorian typical food [humitas, fritada, canelazo, etc [if you have the opportunity to try them, you should]] and spent many time talking about everything.
Now that I think about it, we spent most of time cooking, eating and talking. But you know what? It was worth it.
When your family lives far away it's important to take full advantage of the time you have with them.
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A Phenomenal Week
I had many goals for last week. I didn't actually complete any of them, but it was still a phenomenal week. What happened was that three family members who had moved to Spain many years ago, came to Ecuador to visit, and last week was their final week in the country, so it was full of family activities together. We all visited Lake Quilotoa, a beautiful place that my cousin researched on the internet before coming to Ecuador.
They also visited the Middle of the World in Quito and the City of Otavalo in the province of Imbabura. However, I couldn't go to those places with them because I had to work. Anyway, we also prepared a lot of typical Ecuadorian food [humitas, fritada, canelazo, etc., all of which you should try if you ever have the opportunity!] and spent much of our time talking about everything imaginable.
Now that I think about it, we spent almost all of our time together cooking, eating, and talking. But as you might imagine, it was definitely worth it. When members of your family live so far away, it's important to take full advantage of the brief time that you have together whenever they visit.
Hi Andres. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that his helps you. J.
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A phenomenal week
I had many goals for last week. I didn't complete any of them, even though it was a phenomenal week.You see, three family members who lived in Spain many years ago came to Ecuador, and the last week was their last week on in the country, so the whole week was full of family activities.
We visited the Quilotoa Lake Lake Quilotoa, a beautiful place that my cousin saw / found on the internet before coming to Ecuador.
They also visited the Middle of the World in Quito and Otavalo in the province of Imbabura. I couldn't go to those places because I had to work.
Anyway, we also prepared made a lot of typical Ecuadorian typical food [humitas, fritada, canelazo, etc [if you have the opportunity to try them, you should]] and spent many a lot of time talking about everything.
Now that I think about it, we spent most of the time cooking, eating and talking. But you know what? It was worth it.
When your family lives far away it's important to take full advantage of the time you have with them.
Well done. Your English is very good. A few little mistakes but overall very nice. The tone of this is quite conversational, e.g. "now that I think about it" , "But you know what?" Usually we wouldn't use this language in written text unless it is for speech. But maybe this is the tone you wanted :)
Good Luck!
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