JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wo

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th Since I was 5 years old, I have used the computer nearly everyday. A long time ago, one day, my father gave me old computer which he don't even use as he bought new one. So, since then, I had used that until he gave me newer one again. Until when I became a junior high school student, I thought that I was good at computer. Oh year, I am writing here like this, I can't even do programming at all lol However, focusing on the point of my speed of typing, I was really confidence with that. But since I met the people when I was in the junior high school, this confidence was disappeared from me. Actually, her speed of typing was so quickly that I was surprised very much. I was, to be honest, so frustrated to see her skill and so, I was practiced this again and again. Possibly I had practiced tons of times meanwhile I was first grade in the junior high school. Thankfully, my confidence came back to me again, thanks to her. I though then like this, the way of improving one of my ability earlier is to know someone with better skills than mine. What do you think about it?

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Since I was 5 years old, I have computers nearly everyday. One day, when my father bought a new computer, he gave me his old one. From then, I only used that computer until he gave me a newer one. When I started junior high school, I thought that I was good at using computers. Oh yeah, one year I am writing here like this, but I couldn't program at all (lol) Focusing on my typing speed, I became really confident. However, when I met more people, this confidence disappeared. Her typing speed was so fast that I was surprised. I was, to be honest, so frustrated to see her skill, and so I practiced my typing again and again. I had probably practiced tons of times during my first year of junior high school. Thanks to her, my confidence came back to me. I then thought, a way of improving one of my abilities faster is to know someone with skills better than mine. What do you think about this idea?

I think this is a very good idea. As students, we usually try to find teachers who have more experience than us in order to learn more and try to become better ourselves. If they are more like a rival, then there is something inside of us that naturally wants to be competitive and become better than them.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th

Since I was 5 years old, I have used the computer nearly every day. A long time ago, one day, my father gave me old computer which he didn't even use as he had bought new one. Since then, I have used that one until he gave me newer one when I became a junior high school student. I thought that I was good at computers. Oh yeah..., I am writing here like this and I can't even do programming at all! lol However, focusing on the point of my typing speed, I was really confident. But, since I met the people in the junior high school, this confidence has disappeared. Actually, her speed of typing was so quickly that I was very much surprised. I was, to be honest, so frustrated to see her skill and so, I was practiced this again and again. I had possibly practiced a ton of times while I was in my first year of junior high school. Thankfully, my confidence came back to me again thanks to her. I think that the way of improving one of my ability earlier is to meet someone with better skills than mine. What do you think about that?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Apr.4th(writing about my typing skill) Since I was 5 years old, I have computers nearly everyday. One day, when my father bought a new computer, he gave me his old one. From then, I only used that computer until he gave me a newer one. When I started junior high school, I thought that I was good at using computers. Oh yeah, one year I am writing here like this, but I couldn't program at all (lol) Focusing on my typing speed, I became really confident. However, when I met more people, this confidence disappeared. Her typing speed was so fast that I was surprised. I was, to be honest, so frustrated to see her skill, and so I practiced my typing again and again. I had probably practiced tons of times during my first year of junior high school. Thanks to her, my confidence came back to me. I then thought, a way of improving one of my abilities faster is to know someone with skills better than mine. What do you think about this idea?

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