More one day!
Please someone correct this!
Today I awake at 6:30 am, I left my daughters in school and went to my office.
My daughters are all to me. They are a reason of my life.
The oldest has fifteen years old and the newest is eight.
I like to play soccer after all I'm Brazilian. I like to go in restaurant and cinema.
Whats movies do you like?
Whats hobbies are more common is USA?
Thanks a lot!
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More one day!
Please someone correct this!Today I awake at 6:30 am, I took my daughters to school and went to my office.
My daughters are all mine. They are the meaing of my life.
The oldest is fifteen years old and the youngest is eight.
I like to play soccer, after all I'm Brazilian. I like to go to restaurants and the cinema.
What movies do you like?
What hobbies are common in the USA?
Thanks a lot!
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More one One more day!
Please someone correct this!Today I awake woke up at 6:30 am, I left my daughters in at school and went to my office.
My daughters are all everything to me. They are a the reason of my life I live.
The oldest has is fifteen years old and the newest youngest is eight.
I like to play soccer--after all I'm Brazilian. I like to go in to restaurants and the cinema.
Whats movies do you like?
Whats hobbies are more common is USA?
Thanks a lot!
The things that I changed are to make it more natural--they are how I would personally say the sentences as a native speaker. You did a good job!
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