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The highest temperature is 27 degree today. -20110620 What a hot day it is today! I love sunny days in spring and autumn. Since the scorching sunshine in summer could burn me. I wish I could stay at home in summer. But I have to go to work. I have too many dreams, I can not wait until it is too late to accomplish my goals. I read a lot about the job description today, I felt headache in the afternoon. I wish I could take over my duties as soon as possible. However it is not as easy as imagined. I should be passionate and patient! I should be confidend and considerate. I should be positive and proficient. What I need now,is --change! O(∩_∩)O~

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The highest temperature is 27 degree today. -20110620

What a hot day it is today!
I love sunny days in spring and autumn.
Since the scorching sunshine in summer could burn me. The summer heat is very sorching and it will burn me1. I wish I could stay at home in summer. But I have to go to work. I have too many dreams.  I can not cannot 2 wait until it is too late to accomplish my goals.


I read a lot about the a job description today, I felt had a headache in the afternoon. I wish I could take over my duties as soon as possible. However it is not as easy as imagined.


I should be passionate and patient!
I should be confidend confident and considerate.
I should be positive and proficient.
What I need now is -- change!
O(∩_∩)O~

1.  Or you can say, "Because the scorching sunshine in summer could burn me, I need to stay inside. Since = 雖然,

2.  A very common English error.  It is spelt as one word not two words.  Even native speakers especially Americans make this mistake.

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